- by janeanime008 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 10/08/2008 |
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- Title: ANGEL?
- Artist: janeanime008
- Description: hi hi,,, it's so funny... . my drawing is UGLY! but please leave some comments 'coz i really need it, to improve!
- Date: 10/08/2008
- Tags: angel
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Comments (7 Comments)
- grunnykisses13 - 07/07/2010
- mmmkkehe..mmmphhh ahhahhahaha no im jk jkjk um i woud sugjest studieing the human body in perpotion wise i had the same toubles i look back at some of the stuff u drew and it looks so terrible and to get over the hand thing i make realy long sleeves or them holding something it helps trust me
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- Scrubbledubble - 08/06/2009
- It's really not as bad as you think. She looks very young, and her hand looks stiff, but other than that, she actually looks great. All that you need to do is add movement. Have her skirt billowing out to either side of her, have her hair and sleeves follow that range of motion. It's been a long time since I've seen someone with potential like yours, and I really look forward to seeing your future submissions! I'm becoming a fan of yours; please keep up the great work!
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- Sansra - 10/08/2008
- I would give this 5 out of 5 smile (but maybe make the eyes a bit not so like a square)
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- Sansra - 10/08/2008
- I think its brilliant (it is much better then mine)
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- Platonic Pneumonic - 10/08/2008
- Its hard to tell if her body is supposed to be that small or if you are having proportion issues. The hands are very small, too small, and flat/stiff. The wings aren't too bad and the hair isn't too horrible either. The face is too pointed and the features are a bit crowded towards the center of the face.
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- vladlynne - 10/08/2008
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Yes, clean paper-and make her eyes a little more leveled with her face, and her chin not so pointed.
that would be cute
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- Pataky - 10/08/2008
- I would suggest drawing on clean paper, not lined. That said, its nice.
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