- Title: Just Training
- Artist: JasX
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Description:
ohh I had a dream about this once. I was so happy! X3 A dream like this doesn't happen...well NEVER happens to me. THIS WAS RARE FOR ME!!! O_O
Anyways....Yay! Kakashi!! In my dream he was training me and stuff and I was like..Hellz Yea! XD And and and...umm...Thats all :3
Oh and I guess you can see....That I messed up on a lot of things. =_=''
If anyone can tell me what I did wrong and how to fix it and stuff! :3
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Kakashi(C) By Masashi Kishimoto - Date: 12/28/2008
- Tags: just training
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Caliber Mengsk - 12/29/2008
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Looks good overall. Background should be darker to match the shading of the characters, and the shading on the girls right (our left) is almost opposite of what it should be (darker closer to the body that would be blocking the light, right where the leg meets the body.)
Also, as stated, the arms seem a bit long
Pretty good though. 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Zverina - 12/28/2008
- the arms on the person on the right seem a bit ...long but o well not bad 5/5 ^_^
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- Brit1989 - 12/28/2008
- awesome =3 i luv when i have dreams like that
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