- by Kannon Masamune |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 04/16/2009 |
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- Title: Tinker-El
- Artist: Kannon Masamune
- Description: Avatar art done for Tinker-El. This represents a couple milestones for me. This is the first art submission I've made under the new arena format. This is also the first real bit of art I've done in 2-3 years. Critiques are welcomed and encouraged.
- Date: 04/16/2009
- Tags: tinkerel
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Moup - 04/16/2009
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You might want to study anatomy a bit. The torso almost looks masculine to me, you want to exaggerate on the hips a little bit more, make the waist slightly smaller. It'll make her look more feminine.
Also make the arms a little bigger/longer, they look very stiff, and the kneecap should be angled differently.
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- x-sweetangelof1993-x - 04/16/2009
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Looks great, just one thing bugs me, her hand seems to small to me.
5/5 - Report As Spam