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  • Transparent (A Yaoi)
  • Title: Transparent (A Yaoi)
  • Artist: OokamiCasha
  • Description: Heres an idea of what Im gonna be doing in the future. This is gonna be my first yaoi maga. Its gonna be about a goth and a jock. Thats all Im gonna say for now. ^ ^
  • Date: 12/10/2008
  • Tags: transparent yaoi
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Kitty Merchant - 06/23/2013
  • It is pretty good,but there is one thing that bothers me...The mouths are incredibly awkward. You should of drawn them puckering instead of them all opened mouthed like that. You don't see people about to kiss with their mouths open like that. They are drawn together in a pucker like: -3- not: -A- that is just weird.
  • ll DULCE LIQUIDO ll - 12/21/2008
  • AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA O.O AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA >.< AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
  • OokamiCasha - 12/19/2008
  • Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
    The long haired person is a BOY!
  • xox forevermyself xox - 12/19/2008
  • ok, i'll be completely honest, they look really awkward! the guy looks like he's about to get slapped in the face instead of kissing a girl. and she looks like she just sprained her neck. however, your story sounds absolutely intriguing!
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