- by StellaChii |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 08/14/2012 |
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- Title: say cheese!
- Artist: StellaChii
- Description: my two OC's Stella and Keenan :) would be great to have some comments and critiques :)
- Date: 08/14/2012
- Tags: ocdacutecouple
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Raefuun - 08/14/2012
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here's a softcore (hopefully) critique for you! smile
Stella's neck seems too long, and her collarbone is centered incorrectly. her bent arm (upper part) looks a little wonky, but other than that I think you really pulled off the cloth of her shirt and her pose.
Keenan's head seems too narrow (the skull would make it more round at the top, and less like a skinny oval), and his lower arm (forearm?) and ring and pinky fingers seem wonky. other than that he looks great! nice job overall, keep - Report As Spam
- Blossom1_k - 08/14/2012
- Awesome drawing, makes me feel bad cuz im horrible at drawing sad but this is amazing! love it
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