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IT ALL STARTED THE DAY MY PARENTS TOLD ME I WAS MOVING. I THOUGHT MAYBE TO A NEW HOUSE. BUT THEN THEY SAID THE THINGS I DIDNT WANT TO EVER HEAR: OUT OF THE STATE. THATS WHEN IT ALL STRTED I HAD FINSHED THE 6TH GRADE ADN HAD MADE SO MANY FRIENDS ADN I KNEW THAT THEY WOULD ALWAYS BE THERE FOR ME. UP UNTIL THE DAY MY PARENTS SAID WE ARE MOVING OUT OF THE STATE.BUT THE REAL STORY STARTS WHEN I GO TO MY NEW SCHOOL. I WAS NERVOUS LIKE ALWAYS AND DIDNT KNOW WHAT THE PEOPLE WPULD BE LIKE. I WALKED IN TO MY HOMEROOM AND LOOKED AROUND THE ROOM FOR A SEAT TO SIT IN, THATS WHEN I SAW THEY GAZES OF PEOPLES EYES ADN KEW THAT I WOULDNT BE TEH SAME I WAS THE OUTCAST. BY THE TIME I MADE IT TO LUNCH I WANTED TO LEAVE ADN GO HOME FOREVER. I DIDNT EAT LUNCH I JSUT SAT IN THE BATHROOM CRYING. THATS WHEN I MET SOMEONE THAT WAS JSUT LIKE ME SHE WAS BI, EMO, CUTTER, AND THE OUTCAST. WE HUNG OUT FOR A LITTLE BIT UNTIL LUCH ENDED AND THEN WE MET UP IN SOME OF OUR CLASSES WE HAD TOGETHER. WE TALKED ADN BECAME VERY GREAT FRIENDS. BUT THEN THATS WHEN A SURPRISE CAME OUT OF NOWHERE
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- by blackdeath144 |
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- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: MY STORY
- Artist: blackdeath144
- Description: ITS VERY DARK, SAD, AND ITS ALL TRUE THIS IS A LIFE THAT I WOULDNT WANT ANYONE TO LIVE.....ITS THE LIFE OF AN EMO/GOTH AND A CUTTER...SO I WARN YOU ITS VERY DETAILED...
- Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Julia Dream - 01/18/2009
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SHUT OFF THE GOD DAMN CAPS LOCK.
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- Volkhvy - 01/02/2009
- Pfft,that's not an emo/goth/cutter. That's just some overly reacted girl who want's attention. Next time,use spell check,and don't use caps lock. 0/5
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- The Electricity - 07/17/2008
- Spelling, capitalization, grammar- those are not your main problems. Even if all these aspects were perfect, this would still suck. I don't care about this character at all; I don't care about her middle school status. She's just a emo/goth/cutter. So what?
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- VampireTurk - 07/16/2008
- Next time no cap locks, and use spell-check
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- Little Princess Crown - 07/16/2008
- and it does too have periods.
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- Little Princess Crown - 07/16/2008
- they sound like teachers(if you are a teacher,no offence.)i think the mistakes show the potental suspece of the story.(oh man... now i sound like a teacher)
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