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ash sat with misty, and slurped his tempura. ash? yes swee- i mean misty? will u come with me to a dance? yes! ash jumped up and spilt brocks miso soup. he was asking nurse joy on a date. yes! brock fainted, because a very pretty lady had said yes. misty stood up, and ash jumped up and bumped into misty. he pulled her close and passinatly kissed her. brock woke and stared. eek burning_eyes he grabbed nurse joy and kissed her, but she pushed him away. gasp! that was terrific ash! biggrin really?
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- by Simply A Detective |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: Ash's First Kiss
- Artist: Simply A Detective
- Description: a pokemon romance between misty and ash. its really sweet, and IMPOSSIBLE!!! it includes brock!
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: ashs first date
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- Remy Lafayette - 11/27/2008
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Might want to improve on your writing.
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