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biggrin Breaking Dawn, the after book.
by:Megan Hoffman
Inspiration by:Stephenie Meyer heart
I woke up to the sound of birds, chirping.
The air was damp. Cold wind Blew threw the
window. i new that that day, something was
gonna happen. i just didn't know what. My
mom came in with a glass of chicken blood
Being half vampierI smelt it and went up
to my mother. She came to me in her
hunting cloth. Odd, Iknow... but what ever
she wheres hunting always gets ripped, so
she wheres that.
" Hi mommy" I said, looking at the glass
"Hi Nessy" my mother said, as she
handed me the glass."how was that little, 3
hour nap?" she asked.
"Good, mommy." s drank the whole glass.
"where is daddy?"
"I don't know... why dont you go ask Aunt
Rosily."
"ok" I ran out the cottage, threw the woods
and with in seconds, I was there.
" Oh there you are daddy!" i hugged him
" Good morning Nessy"
" Where is Jacob?"
"He left to get some food for himself.
" How come he dose that dad?"
" He eats because he is not like us.
He is a.... well lets say a dog."
" Oh, I get it."
Mother walked in, carrying a change of
cloths cloths for me.
"i think you wanna get out of your
p-j's. Nessy"
" thanks mommy"
Mother went over and kisses dad.
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- | Submitted on 02/14/2009 |
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- Title: the Twilight of Renesmees Eye
- Artist: cutieie1234
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Description:
This is a story about Renesmee, Bella and Edward Cullen's kid, from the book/movie Twilight.
Thank you. - Date: 02/14/2009
- Tags: twilight renesmees
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Comments (7 Comments)
- marshall11 - 03/14/2009
- it was awsome except a few spelling errors but so what 5/5 biggrin
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- X-iSillyDuck-X - 03/11/2009
- i think it waa ok and ppl if u do not like it y dont u try to write ur own and see how it is if u dont no how hard it could b...that was a nice try btw...:]
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- Teal Agave - 03/09/2009
- Seriously not good at all.1 out of 5 stars.It was actually really bad.It was kind of stupid really.
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- Renesemee_710 - 03/09/2009
- id o not knwo that was ok but ya.
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- glowstick13 - 02/28/2009
- I am sorry but that was horrible.... Stephenie is and always will be better than you. Stop trying copy her.
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- Fayne Darkness - 02/14/2009
- Ummm...yeah... this was simple, and was put out like a poem. Although I love twilight (Big fan) I do not like this fanfic particularly. Work on grammar and paragraphs and all that, before you do somehting else. This sucked. No offense. But It is not all that great. I can't even rate this story, it is too simple and inadequate.
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- xXMechanical KissesXx - 02/14/2009
- Actually This sucked. Work on your grammer, its terrible. Be More Literate!!!! >>
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