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Chapter 1:Enter Naruto Uzumaki and ...?Riku?
This is the untold story of naruto lets go back to the very begining where the 4th is about to trap the 9 tailed fox
The nine tailed fox along with the 10 tailed wolf has been on a rampage for a long while destroying the leaf village the 4th and his best friend trunks uchiha have made chose to have there sons be the host for the demons both the 4th and trunk's wifes were killed by the demons so they prepared the ritual and put baby naruto and baby riku into the ritual circle trunks went to seal the ten tailed wolf into his son riku as the 4th went to seal the nine tails into naruto , once the demons where sealed both men died scarfacing there lifes for the hidden leaf villiage and there sons.
(13 yrs later after the 9 tail and 10 tail incident)
naruto: hehehe paintigt the hokages faces is fun isnt riku
riku: yea it is hahahaha
leaf ninja: NARUTO RIKU YOU TWO ARE IN TROUBLE
riku and naruto: ITS TIME TO RUN HAHAHA
riku and naruto start to jump threw the leaf village with some leaf ninjas chasing them after a while both riku and naruto use a camouflage to hide from the ninja and once they past by thinking it was safe they came out only to be caught by iruka sensei
riku and naruto: we are safe hahahha
Iruka: OH YOU TWO THINK SO
riku: oh s**t
Iruka tied the boys back and brought them back to school once at school sakura and ino were drooling over sasuke and riku.
Iruka: now naruto and riku why didnt u come to class
Riku: oh shut up iruka sensei like u care hmph *riku looks away angry*
Iruka is getting angry and turns to naruto and naruto just turns away*
Naruto:hmph
Iruka: OK EVERYONE WE ARE HAVING ANOTHER TRANSFORMATION TEST
everyone: UHHHHHHHH NO FAIR
everyone goes up and does a good job and when it gets to naruto.
Naruto:TRANSFORM *he uses sexy justu and iruka has a noise bleed*
Riku: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NICE ONE NARUTO
Naruto: haha thxs riku XD
(now we will show you how naruto and riku became friends)
after naruto and riku grew to be little kids they always cause trouble and ran out of class with some friends but the adults of the leaf village always look down at them with hate and anger just because they carried the 9 and 10 tail demons and one day riku saw naruto crying after some adults were yelling and just glaring him down, riku went in and grabed naruto and ran to a safe place and they started talking and realize that they had the same back ground they had no parents no family and the leaf village people always looked down at them and hated them and thats when there friendship began.
(back to present time)
Iruka: NARUTO RIKU YOU TWO ARE GONNA COME WITH ME AND CLEAN THE HOKAGE FACES
Riku: hmph sure whatever you old man
Naruto: fine >_<
naruto and riku spent hours cleaning the hokage faces
Riku:UGH THIS SUCKS
naruto:iruka sensei is harsh
Iruka: smiles* hey riku and naruto finish up and we will go out to eat some ramen
Riku and naruto: NOW THATS SOME INFLUENCE YOUR THE BEST IRUKA SENSEI
naruto and riku doubled there movements and had teh faces cleaned in time for dinner
Iruka:naruto and riku why did you two do that to the faces of the hokages
naruto:because one day we will be hokages and people will have to respect us and look up to us
Riku: not only that we will be the best hokages ever in the history of the leaf village
Iruka: hm *is shocked of the amounts of ramen they ate* wow o.o
Riku: dont worry iruka sensei ill pay for mine u can pay for naruto
Iruka: thank you riku
Iruka and riku pay for the food and naruto askes Iruka a favor.
Naruto: hey iruka sensei can i please try on ur leaf headband please
Iruka: what no naruto you can only wear this if you past your test tomorrow
Riku: dont worry naruto we will be able to pass tomorrow hopeful
Naruto: oh alright
Iruka,Riku,andNaruto: BYE SEE YOU TOMORROW.
The next day:
Riku goes to see naruto so they can go to school together.
Riku:NARUTO COMEON ITS THE FINALS LETS GO MAN
naruto: ok riku *they leave*
*once riku and naruto get to school the girls start to scream ITS RIKU OMG HES SO GONNA PAST*
Riku; ugh why cant they leave me be sometimes
naruto:i say ur lucky man hahahha
riku:yea sure whatever hahaha
students are called one by one teh next person after sakura was riku*
Iruka surprised k riku make a clone and u pass
Riku: oh ok easy (omg naruto he wont be able to past damnit this sucks) *makes a perfect clone*
iruka:good job *hands riku a headband and riku leaves unable to tell naruto about the test*
Iruka surprised k next up is naruto uzumaki
Naruto enters the room nervious about what the test is
Iruka: ok naruto the test is for you to make a clone
Naruto(to himself);oh no not the clone test i cant make a perfect clone oh man
Naruto: alright here i go *he gathers charka*CLONE JUSTU *his clone looks dead* uh hehehe ^^;;
Iruka:YOU FAILED
naruto leaves disappointed and mizku talks to iruka.
Mizku:Iruka dont you think you were a bit rough on him i mean he was still able to make a clone just not an effective on
Iruka:im sorry mizku but naruto has to train harder thats the only way he will pass
naruto is on the swing very sad and depress and riku walks towards him with a headband.
Riku:hey naruto if you want you can wear my head band for a while and ill help you train to become better at making clones.
Naruto:no thanks riku i just want to be alone for now ok sorry
Riku surprised k see you man *riku leaves and mizku appers next to naruto and they vanish*
5hrs later the forbidden scroll of the leaf village is stolen
Third hokage: GO AND FIND NARUTO BRING HIM AND THE SCROLL BACK TO US
leaf ninjas:YES SIR *they leave*
what they didnt know was that riku was there listening to the whole thing and knows where naruto will be at and goes after him*
Riku:comeon naruto plz be there i got to find you before the other leaf ninja find you
*riku finally finds naruto and goes towards him.
Riku: Naruto hey we got to go before some leaf ninja come after you after we find a new hiding place we can look at the scroll ok
Naruto:no riku mizku senesi said to met him here and then ill past. i also know a new justu *naruto teachs riku a new and more powerful justu*
Riku:WOW that was good so Mizku sensei said this can help you then i wonder where he
Iruka sensei comes and sees both naruto and riku
Iruka:naruto there u are now lets go back and.......Riku what are you doing here
Muzki comes to see iruka sensei riku and naruto there
Muzki:good job naruto now hand me the scroll u little brat
Iruka:Muzki what are you doing making naruto take the scroll why
Muzki:i was going to ask riku too but naruto asked him to leave and bc there just worthless brats they dont even know why the leaf village's people look down at them so i think i will tell them
Iruka: no dont u know the rules they are not suppose to be told
Muzki:ha naruto riku do u know why people look down at you two why iruka didnt pass you naruto
Iruka:MUZKI STOP
Muzki:ITS BECAUSE YOU NARUTO HOLD THE NINETAILED FOX AND YOU RIKU HOLD THE TENTAILED WOLF
both riku and naruto are shocked and worry
Riku:no thats thats not possible
Naruto surprised .o;;; y-y-your lieing
Muzki:i think ill put the ninetail brat out of the way first *he throws a huge shurkien towards naruto*
Riku:NARUTO
Iruka gets in the way and takes the hit
Naruto:why why did you safe me
Iruka:because you and me are the same i had no parents,i was all alone and i was the class clown always doing some stunt to get attention *iruka crys*
Naruto is worry about iruka and goes and runs away so muzki cant get his hand on the scroll riku follows after naruto and they escape
Iruka:NARUTO RIKU
Muzki:those two will die first iruka then ill come after you *he goes after naruto and riku disguising himself as iruka*
10 mins later muzki finds what looks like to be naruto
Muzki(lookin like iruka):Naruto comeon hand me the scroll so i can take it back
naruto rams into muzki making them fall to the ground and muzki goes back to normal
Muzki:so you are smarter then u look
*poof* it was actually iruka looking like naruto
Muzki surprised h iruka why do you try and safe those two they have the demons inside of them the demons that killed ur parents they are just monsters
Iruka:you are right they are just monsters the 10 and 9 tails are just monsters naruto and
riku are nothing like the demons inside of them
Muzki:i was gonna safe you for last but now ill kill you off first
both naruto and riku go and punch muzki in the gut sending him into a tree
Naruto and Riku:Never hurt our sensei again or we will kill you
Muzki:ha u hurt me ill like to see u try u demon brats
Riku:alright lets show him that new justu we learned naruto
Naruto:right
Naruto and RIku:MULTI SHADOW CLONE JUSTU
Thousands of naruto and riku shadow clones appers and iruka is amazed that they was able not to only make clones but soild real clones that can hurt you
Iruka (to himself):amazing they were able to pull off such a hard justu they where training that hard together
Riku(plus clones)and naruto(plus clones):HAHAH ARE U READY WELL HERE WE GO *they start to beat the s**t out of muzki as he screams
Riku:that was fun
Naruto: i think we over did it ^^;; sorry
Iruka:naruto come here i have a gift for you *iruka is standing up*
naruto goes over to iruka and closes his eyes as iruka said
Iruka surprised k u can open ur eyes now naruto
Naruto opens his eyes and he has a leaf ninja headband
Iruka:congratilations you pass naruto
Riku:YEA ALRIGHT HAHA *riku tackles naruto as they laugh in joyment*
end of chapter 1.
Next time on naruto:everyone is put into squads but one squad is gonna have a extra person not only that there is some trouble between sakura and sasuke
- by riku uchihaz |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- srs diva 2011 xxl - 08/05/2008
- A ten-tailed wolf? And an Uchiha who is nice, even with all the girls going "ga-ga" over him? Sorry my friend, even though it's a good concept, you didn't carry it out well. If you did it with a female Jichiruki, then I'd turn the other cheek. (Oh, and spell Mizuki's name right!)
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- Little Princess Crown - 07/31/2008
- i am sorry, but that wasnt a good naruto rewrite. i agree with the other to, make it less boring, and fix grammer and spelling mistakes, i can be a very good story
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- Kekyo - 07/24/2008
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I...Can't even bring myself to read that. It's written mostly in script-format. That first paragraph looks like a run on sentence and I already see numerous spelling errors.I see lots of areas where the letters should be capitalized too...
Fix a few of those, and many more people will read this. =3 - Report As Spam
- Kishite_no_Mirror - 07/17/2008
- I've gotta say.... this was really hard to read. I'm not going to list off every complaint and gripe I have, I'm mean, but not that mean and I want to help you get better, but I will say that the script format is enough to make a lot of readers jump right over the story. You also need to use something called "proper grammar". If you're at all serious about this story you'll do us all a favour and use spell check.
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