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“Now this, is amusing.” the master said, glancing at his two captives. “two for the price of 1!” he knelt down by the angel smiling. “oooh rayos, you are a fool.”
“please.” The angel said “you have to stop this war!”
“no!” the master barked “we will win! I refuse to back down!”
“but…but cant we just make peace? Then knowbody wins.” The master shook his head defiantly “you angels, and your “peace” and “lets all join hands and be friends!”, pah!” he spat beside rayos’s head, thinly missing it.
“but cant…cant you just take me and let celia go? Please?”
“what? And give away the one thing you need to stop this?” he chukled “I think not!” then he clicked his fingers and one of his men lowered the cadge ontop of reyos and dragged the net away. Rayos sat up and groaned. Celia went to stand up, btu then the master appeared infront of her, making her jump, stagger, real backwards and land on her bottem. He smiled, then clicked his fingers again, and all his men suddenly surrounded him, waiting for him to give them orders, it was like every time he clicked, they new egzactly what he wanted them to do. “let us leave.” He said “I have some important busness to attend.” He turned to xelon “redy the next wave to troops.” Xelon nodded, then blurred out as he sped from the cavern. The master glanced one more time at his captives, then him and his men all vanished. There was silence for a bit, then rayos sighed and leanes back agenst the bars, he closed his eyes and leaned his head back.
“im sorry.” He said quietly
“no…” celia said “don’t worry about it, its not technically your fault anyway…” there was silence again and celia was about to say something, when rayos suddenly chuckled to himself. Celia cocked her head “what?” rayos opened his eyes and looked at her smiling.
“heh, well, I was wondering what your mother was going to be like when she finds that your not…” he trailed of, relizing that celia was not amused in the slightest. He cleared his throught uneasily. “no.” he said, shaking his head seriously “not funny at all.” And he lowered his head, but celia could see him trying not to smirk, and she couldent help smiling herself.
“by the way.” She said after a minet. “whats this war thing?” rayos looked up.
“hm? Oh, well, its complicated. Well, I come from hevan right?”
“right.”
“and the master there, comes from hell. Right?”
“eh…right?”
“yeah, so, heavan and hell have been fighting since time began…and probably befor that to.” Celia raised an eyebrow.
“why?”
“well, were compleate opposites, as you should know, but, I think its more for who should get more people when they die, because at the moment, we have the most people.”
“really?”
“really, but people have different views. Some think its because, hell thinks the whole of the after life should be taken over by them, and we think it should be taken over by us. And others think its because, heavan thinks its better than hell and vicor-vercer.” Celia blinked and raised ajn eyebrow
“but…but that’s stupid.”
“huh, tell me about it, but the master wont back down, he wont let us end it until hell wins, so if we stop fighting, the master would send his soldiers and litrially moe us donw, destroy us. So we have no choice, we have to keep fighting to save us from going out of egzistance, I meen, were the good guys!” celia nodded.
“I see…”
“and-” rayos continued, what if hell were to win? If you had been good all your life, you would just get punished anyway in the afterlife. And if they took over it would be the end of all angels and me, I meen, what would the world do without me? I meen…im just amazing I am!” celia chukled.
“but-”
“and-” rayos interrupted “when we die, we crumble into coulerd dust depending on what we are, like, im an angel, so I turn to the classice white or purple dust. You can probably guess the demons couler .”
“red?”
“bing bing bing! Mhm, but, if we all turn into dust, what do you think the battle feils would look like?” celia thought about it for a second.
“…wow.” She said. “that’s…that’s a lot of dust!”
“oh you bet.”
- by Alisa Chatoyant |
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- | Submitted on 08/04/2008 |
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- Title: The Guardian Angel 5
- Artist: Alisa Chatoyant
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celia finds out about the war between demons and angels. will the master have mercy? will Rayos find a way to escape? and now, let the talking commence!
(comments appreciated, just nothing to harsh plz :D) - Date: 08/04/2008
- Tags: angel demon guardianangel themaster girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Alisa Chatoyant - 08/04/2008
- look at my gallery before u criticize or say that it dosent make sense >.>''
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- Alisa Chatoyant - 08/04/2008
- i have alredy posted all 5 of the chapters... an it wont let me edit the spelling for some reason...
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- selket16 - 08/04/2008
- you should post the first chapter, not the 5th or, yes, there will be some confusion. And a war between good and evil...it's a little overdone. If you're going to use angels and demons/devils flesh them out a bit, they're a little too cookie cutter. Give them distinct personalities. And I will admit, the spelling and grammar is too much, I can't finish it.
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- Yiki of the Cursed Plains - 08/04/2008
- It needs ALOT of work... especially in the spelling/grammar/capitization department. Edit with Windows Word before you post on here. >.<
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- Alisa Chatoyant - 08/04/2008
- u haven't read the other chapters yet amd if u haven't noticed, this is the 5th >.>''
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- bonecruncher1231 - 08/04/2008
- sorry
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- bonecruncher1231 - 08/04/2008
- too long to read but the description kinda bored me sorry dude very random and typical topic
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