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BAM!
The door went as I slammed it open hurriedly. I ran outside, bare-foot in the pure white fluffy snow. But, I didn't feel the pinch of cold on my feet. The bare forest looked like a grave yard. The blackened trees, no leaves, covered in white snow reached up towards the sky. Seeking warmth. Not a living thing in sight.
As I reached closer to a lake, I could see it shine brightly. The crystal clear blue-green water brightly shined when the sun peeked through the lightly shaded-in clouds. It was odd that it was not covered in ice, especially this time of the year. Then, I stopped. I could see, across the beautiful lake, a young man.
Suddenly, I was hyponotized by his beauty. I started to walk towards the blue-green water. I stepped onto a little ledge in the water, and started walking on it. Gracefully. Elegently. Walking towards him made me feel warm and fuzzy. I felt happy.
The wind gently blew. His short, black hair followed the winds direction, gracefully dancing along. His slender feature, his gorgeous deep-blue eyes that looked like the night sky, his pale skin. It all seemed vagely familiar. As I still was gracefully walking on top of the crystal blue-green lake, the snow the slowly fell gathered around me. It spun around faster and faster.
As the snow calmed down, it revealed a beautiful pure white lace dress that followed me. It's sleeves were long, and had a snowflake design.
When I got closer to him, he opened his arms and smiled at me. I suddenly forgot all my grace and elegents, and jumped to him. I wrapped my arms around his waist, as he held me close.
Then, he whispered in my ear, "Finally we meet. I missed you, my lovely princess."
- by olive you most |
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- | Submitted on 10/09/2008 |
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- Title: At Last
- Artist: olive you most
- Description: It was a dream I dreamt once. You might like it, you might not. I don't care what you write in comments. Just tell me if it needs improvements, something needs to be added, something needs to be removed. Anything! Except spam...-.-
- Date: 10/09/2008
- Tags: last
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Comments (3 Comments)
- PoisonousMoonlight - 06/21/2010
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Maybe instead of making one word sentences: Gracefully.Walking. Maybe try to use it this way. Gracefully, elegantly. walking towards him made me feel warm and fuzzy. and elegantly is spelled Elegantly, not Elegently.
Hope I don't seem nitpicky but yeah all I found was that. - Report As Spam
- Aliche13 - 10/09/2008
- I wish I had dreams like this. I keep reading stories about dreams. I never have this happy dreams. sad
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- Wowo_kin - 10/09/2008
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I could see it shone brightly. (is supposed to be shine)
he opened his arms open and smiled at me ( supposed to be he opened his arms and)
But Other than that I enjoyed the story. - Report As Spam