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Have you ever heard the story of Allen Rose? It's been over 60 years now, but I remember it like it was yesterday. A tall, strong, and silent man who as cold at heart, yet did hat it took to protect his people. The guardian of the southern gate and one of the four keepers of the Heart of Darkness. My one and only love, and your father. Many knew your father, as just as many feared him. A man ith seven personalities but one mind and body. At most one was seen and heard by others.
To truly understand the type of man your father as, lets start from the beginning. The man named Allen Rose sacrificed everything for the sake of his people. The guardian of the southern gate as an emissary of darkness, the nation of Darkland in which he was born. After Duke Ralio betrayed the diety and given into the light, it was the keeper of the southern gate's job to do away with him. Allen used a fighting ability he developed as a child he called "Deity release" which he used to slaughter a sea of sentries.
Combined with one of his most fierce personalities simply known as berserker, he left no biotic creature breathing. Using massive claws made of chii, Allen ripped down the bridge which would alow him entry into the castle and over the moat. "Ralio, face me you coard, those who defy the darkness will vanish into the night."Allen roared into the echoing halls of the castles' main hall. but nothing more came to him other then sentries of light. "The darkness will swallow you whole and all!" Allen's voice shook the halls as the mighty earth was beginning to tear apart in fear of him.
He had no fear, no sadness, and no remorse for the light sentries slaughtered one after another until finaly there were only to left. "Ralio, theres no where to run, no where to hide the only thing left for you is death." Ralio smirked, his bulky frame showed his gluttony truned to face Allen. "No my friend, it is you who will end on this dai. You were foolish enough to come here." Light shot down from the heavens themselves and engulfed the castle in Illuminance. At each end of the castle where glowing swords. The swords created a barrier which trapped all darkness, constantly weaking it until it as no more.
"This won't stop me!" Allen yelled as he fell to his knees, his death seemed certain. The duke Ralio unsheathed his double edged blade and started for Allen. His laugh became louder as he thought about the reputation he would get from killing the guardian of the southern gate. Duke's Ralio mind started to wonder, why just stop here. Let the other three comeas well. His mind got so full of proudful and boastful images that his eyes left Allen, which became the beganing of the end for the duke. Allen started to will the last bit of his strength to stand and.....
"Mother, mother what's wrong?" A women's voice is heard. "Mommy, mommy get up why are you shaking so much?" The narrator slowly closes her eyes and sloly fades into a deep sleep, as the women continues to call out to her mother hose heart slowly stops beating of old age.
- by thug to the limit |
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- | Submitted on 10/14/2008 |
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- Title: The story of Allen rose as tol
- Artist: thug to the limit
- Description: well im bored so i decided to just type a story i write for my lit class using chaucer's narrative frame writing style... or was it frame narrative? Anyways my teacher really liked it, she liked enough to give me a 97 on it reason i didnt get 100 i had like 2 grammar errors on it . anyways onto the story (sorry my w key is messing up)
- Date: 10/14/2008
- Tags: story allen rose
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