- Dashing to her room. Katrila lookes through her window looking to the guys house. Seeing at it all of a sudden Katrila looks and saw that the guy was looking at her. Feeling emmbarestd she gives a shy wave. Seeing her looking at him he waves back at her. Letting her blinds fall back she looks at her room. Ya like he could like me."Hey Katrila is that you?" a lady said coming towards her door. "Ya mom im here just looking at something." Katrila says trying to clean up her room really quick. "Ok. Your father is coming home late again so were going out for pizza. Hurry up if you want to go." Her mom said walking away from her door. Katrila had two other brothers that if, if not for her door, would just marnch right in without knocking. "Hey Katrila is that you?" One of here brothers said opening up her door."Ya its me Shank." Katrila sai whil falling to her bed."Are you ok? You look distressed." Shank was always able to see if his older sister was upset. "Im ok just having guy problems.""What is it that guy that moved next door? I met him earlier today today. He asked if you were here earlier today i said she might be here later." He said walking out of her room. Katrila lookes at her room feeling that she would not see it for a while. Feeling more depressed she got her stuff and whalked out of her room not knowing whats in stock for here.
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- | Submitted on 10/21/2008 |
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- Title: The Hidden KingdomHearts part2
- Artist: flamingriku001
- Description: This si the second part of the comic im writing i hope youll like it leve a comment if u want remember donations are allowded. Enjoy!!!
- Date: 10/21/2008
- Tags: hidden kingdomhearts part1
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- xAntoinex - 10/21/2008
- umm,not that good,you need to stop with the "ya"and reread before u post,dont mean to be mean,but u need to fix those mistakes
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