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A ghost in a mansion.
"Welcome", a guy says "to our home hope you like what you see",.
"yep I'm liking this a quit bit",.
"how much for it", Tod says.
"only 1 thousand and it's yours", the guy said.
"why only a thousa", Tod tried to say but was interrupted.
"don't ask questions", says the guy "do you want the house or not".
"I do, i do, i must certainly do".
"okay then Tod give me a thousand and it's yours".
Tod has no idea what he got himself into that day.
He started moving his stuff in the day, oddly he see's a red stain by the hall closet.
He tried to scrub tries to scrub it out when his stuff is all unpacked.
But, he failed to so he put a rug over it.
He slept in his new house that day.
As he was sleeping he heard little pitter patteres noises and a child screaming down the hall way.
So he checks down in the hall and he see's a little child running into the closet.
He did some research on what is the background of the house and he found out that...
A father chased his child down the halls and killed her in the closet.
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- Artist: Laters
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Hope you like the story took me 2 weeks to write.
:D - Date: 11/01/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- UC Poika - 09/09/2010
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Maybe you should try some other form of expression. But that is what it takes to write sometimes, sticktoitiveness.
By the way I have started giving 100g to those who read, rate and comment on my stuff in the arenas. Feel free to check it out.
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- akneo841 - 11/18/2008
- I agree it could use some work. it didnt really have much too it not much really got my attention. sorry keep trying though please
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- Miss Lovely Rita - 11/01/2008
- The shift key is a friend, not an enemy D:<
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- Steel Jay - 11/01/2008
- That took you 2 weeks to write? Wow, it should be at least 15-20 paragraphs instead of just one, boring, bland one with spelling and grammar mistakes.
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