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“Why so sad?” came a voice, his voice.
Sam’s head snapped up as a strong arm circled her waist and the other found its way into her opposite hand.
He led her gracefully across the floor. As they danced she felt all her previous thoughts and feelings of depression, anger, loneliness, and everything else melt away. The dance became joyful and celebratory the longer it carried on. A smiled had crept onto her face accompanied by a shy blush. Sam had to admit she was grateful for the dark.
Before she knew it the dance had become faster as bits of Latin dances came into their dance. She wasn’t good by any means but just being given the opportunity to dance such dances with her dark partner was amazing. The dance came to a sudden and abrupt halt both people panting lightly. It was then that she realized she had been dipped, his hand supporting her back the other still holding one of her hands his face not quite visible but she could feel his breath upon her face as they froze in that position.
Breaking the spell he drew her up to her feet again and kissed her hand murmuring a gentle ‘Thank you’. Then he was gone vanished into the darkness the curtains in the opposite wing swishing gently.
- by Knight Piper |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/06/2008 |
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- Title: The Dance
- Artist: Knight Piper
- Description: Well lately I've been writing a novel and I thought I might give you all a sneak peak of part of it. The story is about a young woman who works in a theater that hosts all sorts of things. The main act is a couple dancing, the couple is fairly snooty. Angelica, is the prissy woman and William is the dashing man who all the girls, execpt the main character Sam, fall for. Enjoy^^
- Date: 11/06/2008
- Tags: dance romance love dancingwiththestars theater
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Comments (6 Comments)
- lalaland2106 - 11/24/2008
- It was really good and had sort of a Phantom of the Opera feel to it.
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- vipepe - 11/20/2008
- ???
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- chi-eah - 11/13/2008
- I'd love to see more of this, it has a gothic romantic feel to it. Would be better if you put in more descriptions about the setting, and the characters themselves, but still, judging from this passage, it seems very interesting.
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- Knight Piper - 11/06/2008
- Lol Yeah I just noticed that to. But now its all fixed. Im glad you both liked it^^
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- Chrissy -27-20- - 11/06/2008
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one mistake,persons:people.
but otherwise I liked it.
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- Gaara1260 - 11/06/2008
- Personaly I loved it.
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