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A piece of Fan Fiction~
The cold night air, frosty as it was, whipped at my face. I looked around the darkened area, the bushes across the road were moving in a slight eerie way,
sending chills up my arms causing goosebumps. I could hear the town people scream as they ran in all kinds of directions around me. Panic rushing,
making my blood boil as I ran through the croud, dodging this way and that towards the black-hooded figure who was the only one who was standing
calmly, he had a rose in his hand. The odd thing was the way his face contrasted with his clothing, it all seemed to fit though. Pink hair, red eyes, rose in
hand, nicely tanned skin with a little blush. A perfect man for anyone, though why was he standing so calm? And the most oddest thing was that he was
holding a tall, pink scythe behind him. About three feet taller than his height. He seemed to have a smirk acroos his face as helpless townsfolk ran past
him, confused just as much as I am. The creatures were the cause of all this. It was unlike anything I had ever seen, small an black with piercing yellow
eyes, them looking at you made you feel like all hope is lost. Like darkness engulfing the light within you. They scared me a lot, though I seemed not to be
the one running away, instead, I was the one charging at the guy who looked to be the cause of all this. "What are you doing?" I asked as I ran towards
him, his expression didn't change though his smile widened. He ignored me and carried on observing the chaos at which he was making, that mad me
slightly irritated. "Hey, I was talking to you!" I jumped up right infront of him, his floral scent covering my nose with a beautiful scent of rose. His smile grew
smaller but he still wore a smile, he made a swift movement of his scythe, bringing it up into show a bit. Probably to warn me in some way. "And what is
this incolent little brat doing here?" He said, as if continueing a sentance that he had already began, he tilted his head a bit towards my direction and his
smile grew. I couldn't decide on if he was talking to me and if it were a rhetorical question or not. Though my question was answered when another man
stepped out of the shadow behind the brick wall which was behind me. He wore the exact same clothes as the person standing right infront of me but his
hair was a different colour, a light shade of blue. He looked a slight it rough as he had two red scars on his face which criss-crossed right above his nose
and inbetween the deep blue eyes. "Just get rid of this one so that we can continue, Marluxia." It was the other hooded figure talking again. He gave me a
stern look as he made it swiftly to the one supposedly called Marluxia. "Shall I do the honours?" Marluxia gave a small nod and smirked, I was trembling in
the spot. I hadn't planned them to be thugs and I hadn't planned for him to be here with others. The blue-haired man then swiftly brought up his weapon
which was far stranger than a scythe. My heart skipped a beat as his ice cold blade touched the tip under my chin, holding my head up so that I could
barely make out anything. The blade actually rattled, I was shivering so much. "Get it over with then, Saix." Marluxia commented, watching the blue-haired
man's little stunt as it were. Saix then smirked and lowered the blade, my heart fell as he did so. But I underestimated of the movement he made, it was
as if in slow motion that the blade was darting towards my throat. With no other actions to undertake I just flinched, my arms spreading out over my face
as if to cover from what would be my death. Memories spread through my mind, the loved ones I would have missed, the life I would never lead. As if all in
slow motion I stould there still. Any moment now could be the blade cutting into my neck, the pain releasing. I waited, and waited. "What?!" I opened my
eyes slowly to see Marluxia stepping forward and Saix sprawled out across the cold concrete. Infront of me then was a boy, his hair definatly gave away
that he wasn't from around here either. His eyes were a deep blue and he wore the most interesting clothes. Blue and sort of a one piece clothing with red
pockets and yellow crosses as decoration. What caught my attention the most was the blade he held. Long, looked a bit like my house key. Just enlarged.
It had a chain hanging down of the handle of which was in the shape of mouse ears and face. The most oddest thing I ever did see. This evening was like
no other, I can assure you of that. My heart raced, thudding against my t-shirt, I was surprised that no one could hear it. A mixture of relief and again the
curiousity flowed through. Who was this guy? It was quite clear already that he wasn't a bad guy. "It's you!" Marluxia shouted, coldly staring at the boy. The
blush in his cheeks rising as the boy smiled, "who else would it be?" He asked. I looked between the both, "your part of the Organization." The boy
commented, he also had a blade at which he swung up from his side and pointed it straight at Marluxia. "What. You don't remember me?" Marluxia asked,
opening out his arms as if to be hugged by our new guest. "Remember? Of course not!" And at that moment I saw the two blades clash with a gleaming
light that left me terrified, yet again. Still curious. . .
- by Radiant Namine |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/07/2008 |
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- Title: Fan Fiction of Kingdom Hearts
- Artist: Radiant Namine
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Description:
Hello! This is my little piece from my fan fiction of Kingdom Hearts! xD
Yes, I know it doesn't follow on from any of the stories, I put myself from the first person point of view and what I would have done if the Organization XIII came to take over Earth! I hope you enjoy it! Don't take it seriously, I'm trying to grasp what the characters would do. So please, I like nice, and advice sort of comments! So that I can improve! Thankyou! ^^ - Date: 11/07/2008
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- Demonicnesz - 05/23/2009
- <3 kindom hearts!! i luved it razz i wanna know when the next kindom hearts comes out smile if i find out i may tell u
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