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The story starts at a dark alley;
"Have we lost him?"i said.We just finished running away from a total creep.I meant him online and he found out what town i lived in and who I was so he has been stalking me the past."Who is he?"asked Jesse,my best friend since 3rd grade.My name is Lauren James.I'm a secret vampire.No one knows that I'm a vampire."He is a guy from my myspace."I told Jesse.Later,me and Jesse were talking about a cute boy at school."He is so cute.Do you think he will break up with that stupid spoiled brat Britney?" "I think he will soon, but i don't think he will get a girlfriend for a while."I couldn't tell Jesse about how he already broke up with Britney but I knew I had to soon.The door suddenly knocked and it was so loud it made me jump a foot high.I went to the door and wandered if my mom forgot her key again.I was home without parents aroud so it probly was my mom again.So I opened the door and screamed.........
- Title: Take a bite out of love.
- Artist: Mgirl462
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Description:
About two vampires that are in love.
A tribute to "Twilight" - Date: 11/15/2008
- Tags: today tomarrow
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Ecclipze - 07/19/2010
- quite confusing
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- Twisted Black Roses - 09/09/2009
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Maybe you should add a bit more detail, maybe better transitions. This scene keeps lurching ahead great chunks of time...
Also. "I'm a secret vampire. No one knows that I'm a vampire." You don't need both sentences, that's redundant.
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- Strwberry Mew Ichigo - 06/28/2009
- are you going to weite more???
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- Lost-in-Dreamland-again - 03/02/2009
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What is this? - Report As Spam
- Yukilunny598 - 11/25/2008
- Im confused. you keep switching scenes.
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