Naruto`s love ones

• Artist: l-Sasukes sexii gal-l
• Description: well i worked hard plz good comments! :3Naruto was goin to garras house when hes missin the whole sand a nd leaf village go on a missiopn to save him and guess who has garra? and part 2 will come soon
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: narutos love ones

One day,as Naruto was going to play at Garra`s house he heard a `SCREAM!' He ran as fast as he could to Garra`s house "NARUTO SOMEONE TOOK GARRA!"Temari said sadly. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" Naruto said screaming.Naruto ran up to Tsunade`s office"`Granny Tsunade! GARRA IS KIDNAPPED!!!!!!!!!!!!""WHAT?!" Tsunade sounded a red alert. The villagers quickly ran up to her."WHATS WRONG LADY TSUNADE!?" Sakura said sadly. "GARRAS MISSING!" The villagers were scared and said,"LETS ALL HUNT FOR GARRA!"Naruto said,"We need to lock down the village so no one can steal anything."They all aggreed.So as they were walking they saw Gais team walking by..."Where are u gouing on a stormy day Lady Tsunade?.." "OH SHUT UP AND JOIN GARRA IS KIDNAPPED!"Hinata was walking back of Naruto mummbiling..,"Naruto-kun..... Naruto-kun.."suddenly...*BUMP!"Hinata fainted,so Naruto carried her."Are we there yet?...""We are here!""SNACK TIME!"Tsunade said. 1 hour later..."ARF ARF!" "WHAT IS IT BOY?!"Kiba said."ARFY ARFY ARF!""He said to followw him!"So they followed akamaru."O-O-O eek UH...GUYS?.....HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"sakura screamed. scream "OMG THE AKATSUKI HIDEOUT!"Sasuke said running around."AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"EVERYBODY SAID."STFU! LETS JUST GO IN!"Tsunade said.So they went in....."AHHHH! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Garra said furiously.We sneaked in to see what was happening when suddenly...."AHA! KISAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"said Itachi."Yes Itatchi-Senpai?" "I found other people in our playroom Kisame grabbed the leaf villagers and killed them exept Team 7! "SHARINGAN!"Itachi said. "EWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Sakura said lookin in his sharingan when she sees him naked. O-O"uh...... ll-_- crap....X.x"sakura said weakly."SAKURA!!"Naruto said crying..Hinata came tto him and said,"YOU HELPED ME SO I HELP YOU!" They saw kakashi die....."They cried harder...."NO...."WE fighted all we could..."When Tsunade surrenders....we said,WHAT!?"So they swoshed the big knife at tsunades body and killed her..We ran back to the village Naruto was new hokage and we had a sad funeral.....we all sighed. Hinata was finally married with Naruto

Comments

[XXyour_only_demon_girlXX]

Oh and awsome pics btw.

//_^

[XXyour_only_demon_girlXX]

Okay I know I know Im the Evil-bad-lame-critic-lady-of-the-house-right now but bare with me.

Okay I think.... That you should put some more diolog and like line up the plot better (like what arlenzi said) I know you wanted to make it sweet simple and short and all but you need to make it make sense so that the people that haven't even seen the show know what you are talking about. Ya know what Im sayin...?

[x_iiCarly]

nice story ppl on bottom Suck d**k

[arlenzi]

you should try to organize your story, and not the text after another text. some spaces.

[Alisa Chatoyant]

..im not rly a fan of this type of stuff cuz i dont watch the anime and i dont like storys biased on characters from film or book or w/e. its interesting though =]

[l-Sasukes sexii gal-l]

garra was kidnapped!!!!!!!!!!!!BUTTTT HE DIDNT DIE REA DISCIPTION!~.~ thank u ~_~

[xoxo-candy apple lips-xox]

garra is to sexy to get kidnapped but its ok i like the store its ok