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Ellyonna Smithfrank
By Day
Ally Smith
By Night
Ellyona Smith is a forse not to be reckoned with. She is from France but lives in a bording school in London that her parents sent her to. She walks around with beautiful long blond hair and the most elequant clothes. But why did her parents send her away? Elly walks polite by day, but when the sun goes down.. Elly is transformed into a new person. She has piercings everywhere on her body. Her clothes are tattered and reveling. she even loses her French accent and becomes a punk from London. But when Elly awakes from her nights of partying, she can't remember it. She thinks she slept through the night. Here is a short story from the life of Ellyona Smithfrank by day, Ally Smith by night...
Ally flew to her small dorm. She ripped open her closet and went to work putting the multiple studs in her ears, lips, face, and belly button. She grabbed a dark silk shirt showing the belly with holes in it. She slipped into a tight black miny skirt, pulled on her combat boots, tangled her hair, grabbed her purse, and flew out the door. " oy ally! Get your butt over here! Now just where 'ave you been? Sneaking a drink at the pub?" Ally laughed as she walked over towards her friend Shaun. "Nah. I was busy getting ready. You know the usuall, stickin' these ruddy studs in me. But they look to rad to take out. 'Ow are you doin?" After exchanging greetings they walked over to the bar. They where in one of Londons most finest nightclubs. The things that made this club amazing was this, the amazing music, the people, and they served to minors. Ally, who was only 15, loved coming here with her best friend Shaun, a girl Ally met one night strolling drunkly down the streets. Ally crinkled her nose at the music tha t was playing. It sounded like they just teleported into a crappy limbo bar. "What the 'ell kind of music is this?" Asked Shauna, enraged that they had changed right in the middle of her favorite song. Ally would have shared in Shauns anger if she hadn't caught sight of the limbo stick and the hot American holding it. He was about six foot but Ally's age, he had muscles, but not too much, and he had dark jet black hair. Ally, dragging Shaun by her arm, ran to get in line for limbo. When it was her turn, Ally arched her back and walked slowly under the bar, winking at the hot AMerican. She stood up and walked to the side, catching the American's attention. He beckoned for one of his friends to take his place then strode over to Ally. "Hi, I'm Andy. What's your name beautiful?" Ally blushed and told him the answer. "Ally. I like that." He came in closer. And bent down to whisper in her ear. "What do you say me and you go some where, less noisy." "Sounds perfect" She replied.
Ally and Andy where still sitting in a cafe when 12:00 came and went. They never runned out of things to talk about. This is it. Ally thought. My one true love. Ally finally left the cafe, not knowing that come sunrise she would never know the name Andy. With Andy's phone number written on her left hand Ally put on her pajamas and slipped into bed. But it would come as a shock when Ellyona Smithfrank woke to a stranger's phone number on her left hand.
- by Hurricane Katastrophe |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Ally/Elly's Night
- Artist: Hurricane Katastrophe
- Description: I just love Elly!!! And also tell me what you think.
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: ally ellys night
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Raitei Rasarai - 12/07/2008
- I like the Jekyl and Hyde little scenario there, nicely done. Just need to work on some metaphor and simile work, also you have some misspelt words. But all in all solid effort.
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