- one day mary was walking through the woods.she was half way home when she started hearing foot steps (foot steps that weren't hers).so she started running.the foot steps started getting faster and faster and faster!then the foot steps stopped.she turned around.no body was there.so she sat down to rest.she fell asleep.when she woke up it was pitch dark!so she started running home.she heard the foot steps again.then the person grabbed her by her hair.she screamed.but no one heard her.when she finally got away she started running again!when she reached her house she walked in thinking that every thing is okay.but when she went to tell her parents what happend she found them dead in thier bed.she screamed.she went to her littles brother's room.he was dead to.she went to her and her older sister's room.she found her sister in the corner crying saying,"he is real!he is real!he killed them!he killed them!then mary said,"who is he ana?!who is he?!"then ana screamed!mary turned around."y-y-y-y-y-y-y-ou!!!!!!""yes its me!",said a voice.ana and mary both screamed.it was their dead uncle!"i-i-i thought you were dead!",stammered ana."i was,untill satan rose me up to kill your family."said their uncle."why do you want to kill us?what have we done to you?",shouted mary her strength coming back."because your mom and dad killed me you little runt!"roared her uncle."what?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?,ana and mary both yelled."you see its true!it was christmas eve,i was on my way to see yall.your parents didn't want yall to see me.so they tried to make me go back home but i said no because i wanted to see yall.so fred (ana and mary's dad)got his gun out and threated me.i went to get back in my car but before i got there he shot me ten times in the back."their uncle said.but why do you want to kill me,ana,and timmy?",mary said."BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM!!!!!!"because i want to.",said their uncle. lol lol lol they're dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!ha ha ha they're dead!!!!!!
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- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: one day
- Artist: piglet9876543210
- Description: this came to mii in a dream.plz comment.
- Date: 12/10/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Keiko-Matsuko - 04/01/2010
- nice!!!
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- MagpiesGambit - 04/15/2009
- I like the story but It needs some basic things done to it; mostly spaces and capitals... still, good.
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- tranquilheart - 12/12/2008
- Dream Dream Dream ... I didnt like da way u finished it but u kept suspense.. n Im sure you can write much better than dis.. good .. still I'll give u 5 to encourage u to write better... all da best for future.... smile
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