candle to humanity

• Artist: love or dont love me
• Description: i wrote this after i supposivly broke up and still feel the same way even though hes done weirder things than me but how to describe my life now, it would be like twilight and he would be edward and i cant let him go and hes drawing me in and im bella having to deal with this temptation
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: candle humanity

he lights the candle to humanity to me

its like i cant see without him

even if he doesnt know that

its well.... true


when i look into the mirror all i can see is him next to me

i think im crazy

but i have another side

the other side thinks that im empty hearted

both of them are sad but i dont think about that


i think about him and mostly only him

i stare into his eyes

i look at the back of his head, his neck, his back, his shoulders when hes not looking

just wishing

wanting




HIM!

humanity

it hold thing together

but without light

its like a balloon floating away

but when lite comes

your life will turn around

Comments

[Voldemort point two]

Rowanseth is an idiot, and Tasty Crayons is right.

I'd give it a 0, but I can't go that low. Please, learn to write. And put POETRY in the POETRY section.

[karm_trebolo]

Wow that IS harsh.... I agree with Tasty Crayons it's kind of a bad comparison it's not even close to the relationship between Edward and Bella

[Rowanzeith of Wyndrivver]

wow, harsh! i think the lack of capitalization kinda adds to the sadness, and it's a poem, so punctuation isnt really necessary. i'd say 4/5

[Tasty Crayons]

I'll be honest - your comparison to Twilight with your stupid romance is just pathetic. You are not Bella and he is not Edward - it is fiction and your romance will be fiction soon, too.

Learn to use capitals, learn to spell, and learn how to use periods, or, maybe a few exclamation/question marks? Damn, read a book. How are so many of you so bad at this writing business. Most of you speak the language, so learn how to write it like an intelligent person.