- This Girl Named Heather was sitting out side on the swing......Her mom looked out the window and seen were she was.she walked to the door and opened it and looked out to the swing and it was empty no heather!she screamed HEATHER!!!!she walked to the swing and it had a red spots all over it.she smelt it,it smelt like......like...blood!!She screamed HEATHER dont fool me hunny plz mommies gave up!!!Heathers only 6 and she has asma.her mom looked around and screamed............COPS HELP MY BABYS BEEN MURDERD!!!!!!!!!!!!!she walked in her house to get the phone when the line was dead.she herd the door sqeak(bedroom door)behind her.she turned to look and herd someone say...........shes alright!were are you the mom said.right in front of you!WHO are you!?andrew.ANDREW WHO!!!heathers best friend.WHAT DID U DO TO MY HEATHER!!!!!!!!!!i put her in her room in her bed chill out!(mom ran to heathers room)she walked in and over to the bed and look in it and the only thing she saw was....................................................................nothing!she said WERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh shes invisible.........said andrew! shes a gohst now,shes dead!!!!Alll the sudden she woke up and said WERES HEATHER!!!!!!he husdand Andrew said.........................DEAD!
- by NiqqaGetOvaYoSelfsz |
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- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: this is really scary!
- Artist: NiqqaGetOvaYoSelfsz
- Description: Dont Scream!!!1
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: fing scary
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Comments (7 Comments)
- v v starlight lunaria v v - 06/18/2009
- uuummm have u ever heard of quotes?! this is one of the worst stories ive ever read!! if u want to know proper spelling grammer and what a better story looks like, then take a look at my stories. This one isnt even worth rateing
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- TerraHilde - 02/06/2009
- That was about as scary as waking up in the middle of the night and the Easter Bunny asks if you like cheese. I have to go..change..my...pants? NOT!! It wasn't scary. I leave it at that.
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- 1mariah25 - 01/28/2009
- not scay and omg NOT THE CAP LOCKS!!!! you didnt even use:" when you spoke and got bad spelling FAIL
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- Korean Eyes - 12/15/2008
- I-dont-get-it?
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- iTwilight gurl snob - 12/15/2008
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thats not scary dats sad!!
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- alittlelamb13 - 12/15/2008
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wat the heck? thats not scary. it doesnt even make sense
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- The_Uninvited_Spirit - 12/14/2008
- not scary at all!! i've seen scary. this is not it.
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