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Once apona time a little boy named Jamie got atacked by a vampire and he was just roming around in the forest and waiting for his girl freind named Lucy and she wasnt there yet and the next thing he knew was that a vampire swept down and sucked a lot of blood out. He died and about a min. later he was turned into a vampire. Not a good vampire a bad vampire and he killed Lucy and she became a vampire to she was even worse of a vampire. Lucy sucked Jamies blood out and then he turned into a good vampire. A week later a girl that was only 15 got into a car crash and Jamie saved her life her name is Beth and...
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- Title: The Life Of A Vampire
- Artist: boogaloogirl95
- Description: a boy named jamie turnes to a vampire
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: life vampire
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Comments (6 Comments)
- ohyeahyeahyheayeah - 07/14/2011
- cool
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- Roxti - 04/16/2009
- Vampires don't have blood. But it was a good story. 4
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- Fayne Darkness - 02/20/2009
- Okay...well... it was okay, but it was too short, even for a prologue or chapter or whatever. You need to work on making your entries longer, and more detailed and interesting. It's good, though. I like the vampire theme and the plot line. Vampire's are cool wink 3/5
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- Blue_Berry_Hacks - 12/19/2008
- i .. hmm lets see .. well that was good .. but i cant say that it makes me want to read more .. it just isnt that interesting. .
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- Wuni3 - 12/14/2008
- Nice job, a few spelling errors and grammatical errors, but that can easily be fixed. I can't wait to see the rest. ^^ Ooooh I love vampires.<3
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- boogaloogirl95 - 12/14/2008
- i just love my story
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