- Once there was two elements One that lifted in the Heavens and one that drifted in Hell when combined you will be sent to a strange world where no humans lived no anything to be exact but only dragons they rised from the heavens and melted from Hell but they will combine also making the King of the elements and rules the land where nothing lived...
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- | Submitted on 12/18/2008 |
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- Title: Dragons Rule
- Artist: Unlike_the_deaths
- Description: I got this from my favorite song that is called Land Where Dragons Rule by dragonforce serch this on youtube.com
- Date: 12/18/2008
- Tags: dragons rule
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Unlike_the_deaths - 12/26/2008
- OMG they know my sister's age XD !!!!!
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- TheEaterOfFood - 12/23/2008
- i agree with hime
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- tea-maki-chan - 12/23/2008
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ARGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH! I hate it when people do this! You have a great idea but....grammar much? You don't even have one period in there. That's called a run-on sentence. This piece of literature looks like it was written by a 7 year-old! And beginning a story with "Once" is a Disney thing. And guess what, no one READS Disney books!
Yeah, dude, it was a good idea, but I didn't like the story format from the start. - Report As Spam
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