Mystica: The Lost World Exerpt

• Artist: FlameBlazeKim
• Description: This is just a little part of my Novel that i'm writing... It's just a fantasy about magic, wizards, monsters, etc. i made a forum about it recently, but it has nothing to do with the book... Tell me if you like it and if i should continue writing! Comments and suggestions are applauded! ^^ Thank you! You don't need to rate kindly, it's not necessary, but if you rate lower than a 5, please tell me my flaws. Thank you so much!
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: mystica lost world

I’ve often wondered if there was life after death… if there was a world other than this one… if … there was a way to escape this whole mess that is my life.
These things I’ve often wondered, became reality. But, like most things that don’t seem rational, you rub your eyes, and hope it goes away. If it doesn’t, you turn around and simply ignore its presence, and the strange feeling that it gives you. Or, sometimes you stare in fascination, and curiosity takes you over. These reactions differ with your amount of courage and imagination. One question before you begin this book. Do you believe in magic?
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Comments

[lmarie08]

cool!!!

[misha le]

cool...please continue

[Diabloscandy]

"..." used way too much, not proper writing form.

btw, How can you say "rate kindly" when you are a jerk on other peoples entries. Thats not very nice.

[Bachiko Ryuu]

Good Job! and good luck!!
-Mopey
Mrs. Claus won't let me near razors anymore, so I need you to find one for this toy.
My comments: I wonder why!