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"Are you sure that is a good idea?" I nervously ask.
"No, but that's why it's so much fun!" she squealed while laughing.
I had just met her. this strange girl with her baby blue hair in two puffy
ponytails. Her eyes twinkle with a child like attitude.
I had been depressed. Everything, it just, fell apart. I had just sunken
into an alley way to hide, from everything, that reminded me of...
She saw me and just bounced over and started asking me questions.
"What, are, you doing?"
I just looked up, nothing seemed worth it.
"You know, you seem to have no manors, I mean I asked you a question."
she starts to laugh.
"You know, I have just the thing to make you, wait your sad, I know!
I'm so smart!"
She pulls me up and starts dragging me out of the alley. I just stare at her,
then I give it a try.
"Who are you?"
"Yaa, you answered! I mean I was afraid you weren't going to say anything!
Oh, ya I ramble just stop me if I do. My name is Christina. What's yours?"
I hesitate, but what the heck. "My name is Memoran."
"OMG! I love your nam- Oh were here, come on I've always wanted to in that
place."
I finally look up. I'm starring at a abandoned cathedral. It has the towers of a
castle, and certainty the gloom. It looks very eerie almost from a different time.
High up, right under the brown tile roofing, are amazing stain glass windows, dust
has covered them but even through that filth you can see the beauty that they were
and could become again.
Christina begins pulling me toward a old double door with thorns and roses etched
into the wood. There is a old knocker with a dragon head. All this time Christina has
been talking. I feel kinda bad and come out of my world and start listening again.
"So, that's why and because of that I've always wanted to go inside. I mean people
claiming that they have seen a man with wings and a horrifying look plastered on his
face! Just through a window, I mean this will soooo brighten your day! So lets go and
try and see this um, demon dude in person!"
"Are you sure that is a good idea?" I nervously ask.
"No, but that's why it's so much fun!" Christina squealed while laughing.
- by Redofcolor |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: Into the Unknown - Chapter One
- Artist: Redofcolor
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Description:
This is a story I'm currently writing. This is Chapter one! Hope you enjoy, it will get more interesting promise. (with any story I read online it always seems to say that) =D
P.S. If I have any spelling or grammar mistakes please let me know. Oh and I would love criticism. I get tons from my friends but more is always appreciated.
P.S.S. The Image was created using Tektek to represent the main character. In the next Chapter I will tektek what another character looks like. =) - Date: 12/23/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- lego3461 - 07/28/2020
- i like it but i thought it was the song
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- dessunya - 07/17/2009
- i really like it :}
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- Trisha With A Chance - 02/03/2009
- This is a nice story line and everything, I enjoyed reading it. ;] Maybe just combine some of the sentences or use a few more descriptive words. It sounded great though, keep writing!
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- 3v1L L1f3 for3v3r - 12/24/2008
- It's caught my attention keep on writing
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- Lance Donner - 12/23/2008
- Keep writing, it has potential. : )
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