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Chistmas Sad
By: Sami aka moocow63 blaugh
"Father's home!"said Tommy.
Jill got the ham out of the oven.
Carl walked in with a smile and a present.
"Merry Christmas!Here Tommy can you open this for me?"Carl said still smiling.
"Yup, I can keep it to if you what." said Tommy.
"Ok."
"Super is ready boys."Jill said.
"Open it after super kay?"Carl said with a little sadness.
Right than Carl's phone rang.
"One sec please."said Carl
5 min. later
"What's wrong honey?"Jill asked getting the plates
"I have to go back to work."He siad.
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"Go than come back its Christmas Eve!"Jill Said.
"I be Back in a flash!"Carl said.
1 hour later
We ate super with out him.
We wacthed a movie.
It was 2 hours and 24 min. long.
We went to bed.
11:34 the phone rang.
Mom picked it up slow.
"Hello?"
"Jill...Jill Jones?" a man said.
I picked the phone up that was in the hall way.
"Yes this is she."Mom said.
"I'm Larry the cop thats was walking on the sidewalk today."Larry said
"And!?Why did you call Larry?"Jill asked.
"The was a wrack.Carl was in it.We tried so hard to save him."Larry said with sadness.
"Jill?Jill?"He said.
I looked in the living room where Jill was.Sitting.Waiting.Waiting for a sign.A sign that Larry was lieing.Lieing that Carl did not pass.Not pass to the lord.The "big man".
I felt like I died that day that time.Frist I was the most happy boy in the world now.Now Im...feel like Im dead.Like Im not hearing what I want to hear.
The funral was on Christmas Day.The whole twon was there.Even jail people.No one talked...I was sad.He was gone.Gone for ever.How could I live?Live with my heart turn in two?
- Title: My Dream of Christmas
- Artist: moocow63
- Description: Its about a boy and his father that love each other 100% and with a great house,wife,kid and job Christmas is that saddest night for Timmy...kid.Carl...father... have to go back to his job.
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: dream christmas
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Lizabite - 02/28/2009
- and grammar.....
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- Lizabite - 02/28/2009
- Great job! spell check it tho, i noticed quite a few mistakes. but the plot was very moving =]
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- shadowed hearts-11gost - 12/29/2008
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lol its sad good work!!!!!!!
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