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Screaming, they dragged me here.
Howling, they threw me in.
Crying, they gave me a drug to put into a passive state.
Submissive, they left me alone.
Oh, looky here. I'm in a place full of people 'just like me', and 'just like me', they want to escape. Escape from the cold, grey, stone walls. Escape from captivity.
Again, and again I tell them. I tell them "It was an accident!. It wasn't my fault she fell from the roof of a ten storey building." At this part they all ignore me "She was the one that fell..." Still ignoring "I just helped" Now they get creeped out and leave. They don't beleive me when I say it wasn't my fault, they never do. Now I'm here.
This room, these walls, the one, omnious window, and the door; They are all too small. Everytime I blink, the room seems to close in on me. I can't shut my eyes. I just can't.
Did you know, they give me these...Drugs. They're ment to calm us. They don't. We just lie there, like terrorfied vegetables. Afraid and alone. Hmm...If I really was a vegetable, I'd be a potato. 'Cause they taste nice with butter. I haven't had a decent meal in ages...
*sigh* Every morning they come in and check on us. Then they give us our daily dose of vegetable juice. I'm starting to get tired of being a potato. I may become an aubergine - what ever that is. Anyway after our vegetationing, they leave. Sometimes one or two of them stay behind. I don't like that.
Last time one stayed they did something to me... I'm not too sure on what it was because I was currently a vegetable, but I didn't like it. And I don't want to experience it again anytime soon. I'm scared.
Hah! This time they accidently left the needle. I can do alot with that. I can even escape. Yes! Somehow I can escape this god - forsaken place. Haha goodbye asylum! Nathanial Napier is planning his escape. Oh yes. Hmm... I think an evil laugh would suffice. Crud! They're coming back! I can't stop laughing! Oh well they think I'm mad enough already.
Ha ha ha ha ha... ... ...
- by FallenAngelForMe |
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- | Submitted on 01/06/2009 |
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- Title: Captivity
- Artist: FallenAngelForMe
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Description:
Okay well this is kind of a one shot thing. It's about a kid who has been sent to an asylum under a murder charge and being crazy. The story is told from his point of view; In his mind. He speaks to the reader as if you are within his mind. Kinda like your a different version of him in a way. Yes I know it sounds weird to me too.
Yes... so enjoy... If you can... Contructive critisim encouraged. - Date: 01/06/2009
- Tags: captivity asylum crazy drugs vegetable
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Comments (6 Comments)
- big_daddy_cheesstake - 07/18/2009
- this really made me laugh!!! xD i'de be a potato to when you put it that way! 5/5 dude!!!
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- Abbywa - 03/24/2009
- That was really interesting i'm curious to find out what happens. and what they did to him when they stayed behind xD pls pm me if you continue.
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- Purumi - 03/24/2009
- Wow... I was actually shaking after reading this... that was seriously well-written! wink
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- Skadi Sundermount - 01/22/2009
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interesting though i dont see how they made the leap from murder to crazy.
might want to leave the *sigh* bit out to
Otherwise its rather interesting. I'd like to see what he does with that needle and how he's going to keep them from finding it. - Report As Spam
- LightChangeOfHeart - 01/19/2009
- This is cool. I can totally feel it. Are u going to write more? if so PM me. Peace!
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- Clapper Cheeks - 01/10/2009
- there's nothing i thought needed to work on, and the last part was funny. Lol 5/5
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