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"It's the end of the line bub. There is no where for you to run. I know you killed sweet Annie's mother." I said. I'm probably getting too ahead of myself. First of all, we're at an ally. My assistant, is also my daughter, Annie is with me. Yes she's only 6, but she's good. My name is John, Detective John. This all started about 2 nights ago, 11:12p.m.
"Daddy!! DADDY!!!" Annie was screaming with terror as a tall slender man came in to the house and murdered my wife. I ran to Annie's side. Velvet blood gushed from my wife's mouth. He cheast was heavily rising and falling. Annie's sobbing. Heavy breathing. Silence. Tears streamed down her eyes. "MOMMY!!!" she sobbed.
10:05 a.m. I set out for an investigation. Looking at wanted signs all over. My son came with me. He was about 20. Annie was adopted, she knew adventure, that's why she helps me. My son, a tall man, Greg found many posters but none that suited the unknown man. Then when I actually used my head, I knew someone who might be him...
12:00a.m. No sign of the man, he should have been here by now. I'm getting tired. Annie was too upset to leave with me. She's still crying over the loss of her mother.
3:00a.m. I went to go home. I picked up Annie, then I see it. The same car as the murderer's. I couldn't put my little Annie down so I ran into the car with her in my arms. Their where already about 5 cops chasing the car. The chase went on 'till about the time you came in...3:36a.m.
"I know it was you, but why would you do such a thing? I thought you loved your mother Greg." I said. " Because, mother loved Annie more than me. She never called me. She deserved to die." he said while pulling out..."Annie DUCK!!!" I yelled. What Greg pulled out was a fully loaded pistol. He began open fire. 2 bullets hit me, one in the arm, one in the leg. I jumped into Greg, blood squirting out of my leg. I threw punch after punch after punch. My vision soon started to fade. Crap! I've lost too much bl...
10:45p.m. I woke with a start in the hospital, Annie sleeping in the bed next to mine unharmed. I feel asleep wondering. How was Greg taken away? Was he still out there? Is Annie definatly okay? Too tierd to wonder, I fell asleep, knowing my job was well done.
- Title: The Mystery of the Murder
- Artist: mikmik121
- Description: This is a piece i wuz goin to write in school, but... you'll see. This is when I wouz younger so if it sux that's bc i wuz young. ( NOT A DIARY ENTRY! )
- Date: 01/22/2009
- Tags: mystery murder
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- Clapper Cheeks - 01/24/2009
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