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"Hey Kasumi!"
No one told me..
"So you were waiting here all this time? Haha, I'm sorry, I woke up late."
...That he was...
"Hey, Kasumi? Are you listening to me?"
...a serial killer..
"Kasumi, look out!"
"Ah!" I yelped. My hand felt my chest to relieve myself. It was only a dream.. I checked the time. It was three in the morning. Remembering that dream. The traffic lights turned red, and the cars were mobile. She was walking as a truck was still driving, committing suicide. Kasumi. She always seems to always be in every dream, committing suicide, or getting killed by another person. She was my older sister, until she got killed. Remembering that scene after I returned to the apartment. The person killed my sister the kitchen.
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"Who.. who are you?" I said. The man said nothing.. "What happened to Kasumi?" I picked up a large piece of broken glass, with blood at the end.
"Tell me, who the hell did this to my sister.." The man grabbed the sharp end. His blood began streaming down the glass until it met my hands. Suddenly he snatched it making a deep wound into my palm. I screamed in pain, falling to the floor. Tears began streaming in both eyes. I shook, and I blacked out. I never lost this much blood. When I woke up, everything was the same as it was last time.. Only my sister wasn't there anymore..
- by Sugarhigh234 |
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- | Submitted on 02/07/2009 |
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- Title: Falling In Love With... [1]
- Artist: Sugarhigh234
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Full Title: Falling In love With the Wrong Person [1]
This is actually a horror/romance story. This is my first horror story! I actually feel great about it! Oh yeah, if you say it's not scary, you have to keep reading to understand, alright? Oh yeah, please don't put negative comments. If you do, I'll hit you with a paper fan. If you plan to, then skip this story. If you want to give advice on how I could make the story better, feel free to post the comment. Thank you for reading! - Date: 02/07/2009
- Tags: inlove with horror romance
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Comments (7 Comments)
- GopherNugget - 10/10/2009
- awsum haha cld u plz check out sum of my work and tell me watcha think...
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- -Deathly Destruction- - 09/15/2009
- There are a lot of grammatical mistakes in here that proofreading your work beforehand could have fixed. Look over your work before you post it, or have a literate friend do it for you. I never condone people using Japanese names in stories, as I do not support writing about things that you don't understand greatly to some capacity and this is no exception. The english language has some amazing names out there- look up some and see what you can find! smile Good luck with writing.
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- vivianS - 02/12/2009
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I like this story a lot!.
It's sooo .. Sad. - Report As Spam
- MaegIin - 02/10/2009
- Excelent opening!
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- In your bed - 02/09/2009
- Wow! biggrin I loved it! I just wanted to continue reading... Can't wait for the rest!
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- Sugarhigh234 - 02/09/2009
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^ ^ thank you for the comments people!
I will start on the second chapter soon~ - Report As Spam
- an_t_social8 - 02/08/2009
- Ooo smile good and creepy smile 5/5
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