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My bones are broken
My skin is cut and bruised
But they are nothing in comparison to my
Broken Heart
You've torn my soul and hold it in your hands
You pull it and twist it
You pull me through hell and back
You kill me and bring me back to life again
Just to torture me
Again
And yet through all of this I still love you
My heart beats for you
It beats for you
It beats for the one who is killing me
You are my Loving Murderer
- by bindyblueeyes |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/10/2009 |
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- Title: My Loving Murderer
- Artist: bindyblueeyes
- Description: Just a story about a murderous love
- Date: 02/10/2009
- Tags: loving murder
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Comments (7 Comments)
- lol_nikki_lol - 01/13/2010
- very nice. it really touched me, made me think. 5
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- bindyblueeyes - 08/21/2009
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hmm... i have to agree....
not sure how i will change it if i will
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- ElectraShocked - 08/20/2009
- You use the word "you" too much in the middle. It makes it sounds a bit repetative to me biggrin . I hope this helps you a bit. Comment and rate back? You have good potential, keep up the good work.
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- ami258 - 08/10/2009
- my god.....its beutifull
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- Emi-Koizumi1600 - 07/24/2009
- this is incredible
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- kinoue - 02/16/2009
- awsome!!
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- ElvenFalcon - 02/14/2009
- LUUV IT~~ 5/5
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