- Lilly was sitting in the living room filling out her college applications, when her dad stumbled in drunk as usual, he started to make his way towards her. "Dad i think you need to lie down." she said, "Not unless you come with me." he said, "Dad you're drunk!" He grabbed her by her hair and dragged her towards her room. If you were there you could have heard the blood chilling screams. He left her immobile body lying on the floor, she was that way when her mother came home. She tried to tell her mom, but she only ignored her until her mother caught him, Lilly was screaming for help. It sounded something like this...... " Sammy, Sammy?" "Will you stop struggling this will soon be over." "b*****d get off our daughter." By the time the police arrived Lilly's dad was already gone. Three months later... in her mom's hometown Lilly made some friends at Wolfson High. But she spent most of her time with Cora. She stopped talking to her mother, because she wasn't there when she needed her the most. Tonight was the big Halloween blowout at Lucky's. At Cora's house.... "So whats the big surprise?" "Don't freak." "I won't, i promise." Lilly took the hood off her head. "Oh My Gosh!" "You said you wouldn't freak." "I lied." "Hey don't you dare." "Smile." Then the wind blew a waft of tuesday's meatball surprise, Cora's mom's specilaty which sent Lilly rushing to the toliet. "I thought meatball surprise was your favorite food?" "I have the stomach flu, i think." "Go to the docter." "I will tomorrow." Lilly couldn't wait for the party cause she would get to see Joey, the love of her life or the bane of her exsitience. They were friends in middle school, until she got raped she stopped talking to people , even tried to commit sucide, that's when she was sent to Saint Mary's. The days there were her worst nightmare it was like living in hell.
- by princessloveangel25 |
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- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: Stains part 1 How It Started!
- Artist: princessloveangel25
- Description: It's about a girl who gets raped by her father , while her mother turns the blind eye, when her her mom finds out its too late and they have to move back to her moms old home town. She has nightmares about her dad and she gets pregnant. And her dad is getting released. So who knows what will happen? This is dedicated to Cora.
- Date: 02/24/2009
- Tags: stainsofthemind
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Comments (4 Comments)
- XarynXVI - 06/05/2010
- Um...this is a summary, and only the first half of one at that. You need more girth to the story, it is only an empty shell, a little sample.
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- Savior_ofunsafespirits - 03/19/2009
- I really can't figure out what you're talking about.
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- Savior_ofunsafespirits - 02/27/2009
- It's good but go back. You're missing capitalizations and paragraphs and a lot of details.
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- TEWG - 02/25/2009
- This is saddening but belongs in non-fiction if it's true.
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