- I could feel my eyes begin to moisten as my talk became a whisper. I turned my back and whispered my last please and walked away. I just walked never stopping but all I could think about is why someone would do such harm to a young person such as me. My heart ached for love and hope but all I found was destruction and chaos. At that moment I knew if my life did change for the better I would be sad forever.
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- Title: Sadest Casts over me
- Artist: Twilight Obsessed Fan
- Description: idk
- Date: 02/25/2009
- Tags: sadest casts over
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- SteamPunkRue - 02/26/2009
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fail. massive fail. it screams twilight. what you need to do is make it longer, cause it seems like you tore a paragrah out of twilight.
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- Lost-in-Dreamland-again - 02/26/2009
- This is good. Fairly detailed and descriptive words. However, you need to write a bit more. ^.^ I like it. Good job!
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