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We continued this way for almost three months. Every night, just after midnight, I would battle this living "Phantom". I write his name scornfully, yet truly I think it with fear. The Phantom here at the Opera is a tyrant; the rafters literally rain his demanding notes.
My teacher hardly utters a word after we strike our initial blows. All the while our swords dance, he keeps an intense gaze on my face. Has he guessed my secret? If he knows I am a woman, would he even bother teaching me?
"This is our last lesson. Ever," the Phantom said one night, unsheathing his sword and interruping my thoughts.
"Would you care to explain why?" I asked, lowering my voice to disguise my femininity.
He smiled, "I have my reasons."
We circled each other, but, for the first time ever, my heart was not in the fight at all. He quickly deflected my blows, disarmed me, and forced me to kneel before him.
"You are defeated. I shall take my prize, if you remember our bargain. Your identity belongs to me!" In one fluid movement, using his sword, he cast the mask from my face.
"I know you," he said startled. "You're the dancer from my opera..."
"Monseiur," I pleaded, "please, I beg of you, do not let anyone know of my swordplay. It would ruin me--"
"Good God! My talent was wasted on a dancer!" he cried to the heavens.
My fear turned to fury at that moment. "Wasted?" I shrieked venomously. Picking up my sword, I lashed at him and, catching him unawares, tore the mask from his face.
I screamed, then turned away. It was horrible, horrible!... and yet, so beautiful. One half of his face was that of an angel's; perfectly angular, but with a softness in his features. The other half was demonic: the features were widely disproportionate, cruelly twisting the mouth into a sick grin. The black bangs hung limply across his forehead, barely concealing the scar that ran from his temple to his eye.
"You have seen Erik's face." His voice stung me like ice. "Darkness awaits you; there will be no returning to the light."
So his name was Erik, was it? And darkness... darkness! He meant to kill me! Send my soul to the perpetual darkness: death itself!
As a distraction, I threw my sword to the side; my tactic bought me enough time to flee. I had lost my sword, but had won my life. Sprinting down dark alleys, I heard Erik's voice, as if he were standing beside me, though it would be quite impossible:
"I know who you are now, Gemma Toulee. Make no mistake: I'll be watching."
The Opera Phantom: Part One
The Opera Phantom: Part Three
The Opera Phantom: Part Four
Part Five
- by Harmonious Dischord |
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- Title: The Opera Phantom: Part Two
- Artist: Harmonious Dischord
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Alright! Here's Part Two of the series! You know the rules: the next part won't come out until enough comments. Here, we learn the name of our protagonist and her "Phantom"... (pronounced Gem-ma Two-lee. I wanted to use accent marks, but the computer wouldn't allow me)
Also, just for reminders, Gemma is the lead ballerina at the Paris Opera House, and the year is 1870. I tried to make the language just so, but obviously made some mistakes. Constructive criticism appreciated! - Date: 03/04/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Iifeboat - 05/27/2010
- This is really awesome! Gonna continue now! biggrin
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- 1snic1 - 04/12/2010
- Still awesome... On to part three, and so we go...
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- MlleOGphan - 11/22/2009
- :3 heehee, awesome-sauce! thank you thank you thank you for making her understand his deformity is hideous! too many fanfic chicks are made to get over it too quickly and think its no big deal. Not to be mean to Erik, but its just a lil detail that always bugs me >.< kudos!
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- TRUTH the LIAR - 09/15/2009
- so very wonderful! nothing to criticize!^.^
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- Midnight Lullabye - 05/02/2009
- Yay!! Love it!! ^_^ ^_^
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- Thor of the Cross-Dress - 04/06/2009
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Wow. I am...in utter awe of your skill.
I must admit, I am fairly jealous.
(Please imagine that the little green smiley is right here, but for some reason it wouldn't work...O_O) - Report As Spam