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A summer night, lit by the luminous glow of the moon lights the path of two young lovers to enjoy the night for they are at the prime of their romance. They enjoy each others company as they talk about themselves and the life they've lived, like their childhood. They walk down a path lined with cherry blossoms as the pedals fall. The pedals dance to their harmonious love and the moon makes it all look like its glowing.
As he listens to her go on, he remembers how they first met. An accident of crossing paths by other people they knew. They were left alone and being friendly people, it didn't take long to be acquainted and friendship was just as easy. She was left by her ex because she wouldn't have sex with him. She ran off during a storm in a tank top and shorts. She was alone and cried but he was there and didn't care about himself as long as she was fine. He gave her his jacket and suffered a long and severe cold that threatened his life, but she was there everyday to care for him and they fell in love.
They walked onto a boardwalk and saw a beautiful mountain side view of the moon and the fireflies buzzing around the lake they were looking over. He took her by the hand and she held it tight. She turned to face him and he did the same and they looked into each others eyes, as you could feel their love as if it was tangible. They leaned into each other for the kiss and it was filled with more romance than any Steven Spielberg film. He held her by the small of her back just as she put her hands on his neck.
He pulled away, and said, "there is so much i want to experience with you, but it'll take a lifetime to do, so i have the perfect solution...". He pulled out the silver, diamond crested ring and went down on one knee and proposed to her, saying that he is ready to spend the rest of his natural born life with her and will not take no for an answer
- by Detrick II |
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- | Submitted on 03/29/2009 |
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- Title: The Story of The Night
- Artist: Detrick II
- Description: A requested story, but not for the ill-experienced in the art of love
- Date: 03/29/2009
- Tags: story night love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Lotus136 - 06/04/2010
- I like it. its cool.
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- Mini Brownie - 06/04/2010
- that was so beautiful i love the way you write Dee
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- Jasmin1618 - 04/08/2010
- we use to be like that i kinda miss it
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- jessicaj23 - 04/03/2009
- aww it is great!!
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- bring the heat - 03/29/2009
- Awe this is really cute ^^
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