- Are you Mike Johnson I said "Uh...Yeah why are you here?" Oh he said and said Im here because I am Your new brother I said oh...No one told me.He said well they should've.I said they did'nt I thought in my head well his rooms finished and his bed and things are in it so..I said Lemme direct you to your room.He said ok He said Oh my god I like this room.So when I awoke the next morning He had the same chloths as me on. I said Why are you wearing my chloths.It annoys me that he copied me I knew already that we would probably not get along.So when I was at school he started talking to all my freinds he had a girlfreind already so I was like how can he be my brother? So the next day I changed when I seen he had the same cholths as me on I put a likenpark tshirt with black shorts.That day he did'nt bother any of my freinds but I did see him maken out with his girlfreind I muttered gross.I noticed that I had my mini labtop in my pocket I played it in class. I got my grades I had failed all my classes.I swore under my breath.I noticed that he did'nt walk home with me I was like whatever.I had homework to do.So I did it.I got a girlfreind that next day.Her name is Cheyenne Mayers shes pretty hot...So I shot some majic outta my hand and casted a spell I was bored so I casted some more magic."My mom called me" down stairs It was dinner time I seen The school boy sitting at the table eating his mcdonalds I got burger king mcdonalds is gross...So I grabbed my food and went up to my room The school boy called me I was like what now..He said I got your homework done for you I said huh whyed you do that" He said to be nice". I said oh well good night.I hugged my parents and went up to bed.And in the middle of the night I heard something like a tv crashing I did'nt know who did it but it was my tv I went into my brothers room.He was sleeping soundly.So I went and took a shower I seen red coming down my arms it was blood I said out loud where is it coming from I seen my brother laughing in my face with a knife I screamed My parents both charged into the room he put the knife in his pocket I said he did it.And I started to cry. So my mom yelled and said What HAPPEND!!!I said sit in the chair. So she did Then I explained the broken tv and the blood.She said what blood.Um I said the blood in my hands.My mom called the ambulance and I went to a mental stupid hospital.And I screamed out This is all his fault so then a couple years later I came back.And my parents had had a baby and I was like not again I had seen that he had taken my room.I grabbed my stuff with my majicand put my stuff back were it belongs.And I kicked him in the nose and he started to cry I said quit crying Killer you ruined my life I hate you!!!!!! He screamed my parents camed charging in I swear furlously at him to shut up he screamed help me I fell and I lay down on the ground crying.I started to get up but my dad smashed my head into the sink "I said WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" And started to cry more and woke up with my head caked with blood and in a hospital I shouted why me!!!!The nurse said you fell pretty far down so you probably lost alot of blood.She said do you know who you are I said No..She mutterd memorie loss just sit there and rest they may come back to you in flashes.So I seen all my memories about what had happend and screamed the nurse came in and said whats the matter? I sad is my brother ok is he. She said no you killed him. So i grabbed the nurses neetle She said No!! And I stabbed it in my throught with it I knew I was going to be dead in a few minutes and so I floated away from my body into the hopeless world I woke up in a basement I wasnt alive. I tryed to talk but No one could hear me I shouted Cheyenne!I went to my grave woke up alive.And kicked my slef outta it.And got up and entered my house everything was back to normal.And my brother he wrote this book in honor of me before I killed him.
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- | Submitted on 04/29/2009 |
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- Title: Unstable
- Artist: Emo_bunny_1818
- Description: This boy one time when he was home alone he heard the door shut it was his new brother ever since he enterd that house his lifes gone to hell !
- Date: 04/29/2009
- Tags: unstable
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Comments (2 Comments)
- CoffinCakes97 - 04/29/2009
- i can't understand it but when i re-read it agen i could understand it but it is waaaaaaaaaay too dramatic for my likings like you might as wel made the nurse say NOOOOOOOO! then in slow-mo jump on you and take the needle i would have given that a 5/5 but i like mysery better so i give it 2/5 sorry.
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- Xcat-vampiressX - 04/29/2009
- its gooD! keep up the good job XP
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