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Jumping into the air Jeff heard someone scream in the distance, it wasn't one of the first stunts he had done but
still many people screamed during his preformances. Jeff made no notice to it and started falling head first towards
the sidewalk of New York where he was preforming some of the things he would be doing at the show outside one of
the hotels that wanted Jeff's unique quality of daringness. Two feet before the sidewalk Jeff did a tuck and roll. Landing
on his feet he earned a roaring applause from the crowd. He bowed deeply and smiled. He started to walk back towards
the hotel but was stopped by someone standing stubbornly right in front of him. The girl was no more than sixteen and
she looked like she was about to bite Jeff's head off. He cocked his head and folded his arms tightly. The girl growled
angrily.
"Are you trying to kill yourself?" she snapped at him with a sharp edge in her voice. Jeff shrugged and pushed past
trying to ignore the screaming fans, he went to open the door but there was the girl again. Jeff was getting agitated.
"What do you want from me?" he sighed exasperated. She didn't say anything but simply let him in and dragged
him along. She headed down the winding halls of the hotel seeming to know exactly which fork in the maze to take.
Jeff stopped then but the girl kept walking not knowing Jeff had stopped following her, she just knew where she
was going. Jeff watched her as she mounted the stairs and glance at him but continue going on. Jeff shrugged and
began walking back towards the doors. Then the smell of matches hit him in the face. Jeff spun around and started
back towards the girl not wanting to see anyone die. Jeff lept over a fallen peice of metal railing and jogged up the
stairs three at a time leaping over the falling debris that littered his path. Jeff knew he just had to get up there before
the whole place burnt down but he wondered how much time he had left. He wasn't the kind who wanted to be a
crispy Jeff. He started coughing in the thickening smoke, His eyes watered as he struggled to see ahead of him. Jeff
knew he had to move faster or he would definatly die... For all it's worth I tried, Jeff thought starting to cralw up the spiral
staircase tormenting him with its lenghth.Jeff struggled in his haste but he felt something pullling on his leg.
It felt warm and wet and almost like it was sucking out Jeff's life through his leg. Kicking with his right Jeff
attempted to kick off the beast or whatever it was that was holding onto him with nails, teeth or something
incredibly sharp.
- Title: In the end
- Artist: Vampgirle
- Description: This is a story about a man named Jeff and his lost sister (Jeff doesn't know it) it is in the end (!!) and these two have to stop it.
- Date: 05/17/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Vampgirle - 11/05/2009
- Thanks alot everyone. Its not the best and I didn't really edit before I posted so thank you!
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- Daemon Yaslana - 11/04/2009
- I like the idea of it but it needs a tad bit of editting so the ideas flow together a bit better! Friendly advice.
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- BewareOfTheYellowPanda - 05/25/2009
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I <3 it.
It's different.
Go Vamp Girle! biggrin
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- XxInnocent-FearxX - 05/22/2009
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I like it~
5 stars - Report As Spam
- Grandmaster Wolves - 05/21/2009
- its very good
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- inoue1891 - 05/20/2009
- It's nice ^.^
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