THE GIRL WHO NEVER RETURNED

• Artist: 14rwaldrop
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• Date: 06/19/2009
• Tags: girl never returned

There was this girl named Sue. Sh decided to go for a walk in the woods alone. SO she went outside and heard someone calling for her. She looked around no one was there. So she kept walking and she heard footsteps, She almost thought someone was following her. So she turned around and no one was insight. "What is there to be afraid of." Said Sue. So she kept walking and she saw a trail of blood. She was getting scared now, but she still wanted to see where the trail would lead. So she kept following the trail of blood until she stopped. The trail of blood lead right to a lake. So she went up to the water and looked into and then she made a mistake an she put her hand in the water. Something pulled her arm. She couldnt get out. Then she turned around and a guy was walking toward her and his throat was slit open. He kept walking over to her and then he grabbed her, slit her throat and pushed her into the water. No one ever saw her again.


You know how i know this. Well easy i am the monster.HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Comments

[Tiny Catty]

whoa very well written! I LOVED IT! Make more :3

[OMG its garra2]

that some fked up sht

[LexyCobriana]

Okay, that was me being a b***h. NOW here's what I really thought, "It was short, but interesting.. you peeked my curiosity, and I LOVE the end. tee hee, I love blood and gore." ^^ Please dont' be offended by my last comment. I didnt' mean a word of it. ^^ Well... I meant the part about liking that last part... rofl

[LexyCobriana]

Um, .... it was .... interetsting... I guess... badly written though... i liked the part at the end though.. "You know hos I know this. Well easy I am the moster. HAHAHAHAHAHA" You need to work on grammar though....

[14rwaldrop]

thnx so did u like it i love writing scary stories

[trinitydescent]

omg!!! But it was good! Interesting, mysterious. I got scared when you said "Then she turned around and a guy was walking toward her and his throat was slit open. He kept walking over to her and then he grabbed her, slit her throat and pushed her into the water. No one ever saw her again".