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a vampire found me and asked"wat is wrong little one?"
my voice was horse"nothing"i said it disrespectfully
he picked me up and bit me
"you will feel better"he said it like he was a father
it felt like a thousand knives were hitting me
so i cried until i couldnt cry no more
and then i got better
the knives were pulled out 1by1
and i felt better
then he said"dont talk and come with me,i will help you"
so the worled was flying around me and we jumped in a sewer "ewwwww" i said "were are we?are we in the sewers?"i asked
"yes we are,and didnt i ask you to be quite?"he said
"sorry oops sorry"i blushed
he hugged me and smelled my hair"you smell delicios"
and then we came to a halt in front of 2 massive demons
"hey zack and mack"then he showed a i.d
"mmhmmmm yes and wat about her"zack pointed a finger at me
"she's new,just a few days old and she was changing"he said
"wats your name"i asked in my high soprano voice
"garret and shutup"he kissed me fast
"WOW"they both said"go on in"
and we went and he pulled me at a table
a werewolf waitress on rollerskates came up and i wrinkled my nose
"sorry about the smell a vamp and a werewolf cant be friends"she said
"2 human blood please"he said in a sweet voice
"wat is that"i asked
"it is good i promise"garret answered
"okay"i answered
- by popsinger102 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/27/2009 |
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- Title: SENNAS STORY CH. 1
- Artist: popsinger102
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Description:
senna is a 15 year old girl who is bit by a vampire who loves her for some stupid a** reason and i mean WTF why did he bite her
he is 18 years old - Date: 06/27/2009
- Tags: sennas story
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Comments (5 Comments)
- popsinger102 - 04/17/2010
- Sorry,first story I have ever done mostly short stories, and thaey all sucked. So, please forgive the text talk. And the horrid sequence of events. I am very sorry. *bows hummbily*
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- Metaphorical-I-Spy - 04/11/2010
- -1/5 for being a vampire romance.... so over done.... i mean really? seriously?
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- Taste Miii Rainbow - 12/22/2009
- I dislike being mean but excuse me? WTF?? really i swear this could be a rather good story but it was all to fast. I mean where did he come from,why and how did he fall in love with her. I mean really if i cant answer these questions that means theres no description it just leaves people rather confussed..
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- The Murderous Jellybean - 11/13/2009
- id make it longer and put more details
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- Frei im Freien Fall - 06/30/2009
- MAKE IT STOP! One: Too much text talk. Two: No grammar. Three: Punctuation. Four: So cliche.
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