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Cant close my eyes. Don’t even dare to blink. Afraid that if I they shut I will see Them. Scared that I will never resurface, that They will finally trap me there in that horrifyingly beautiful world. I will be pulled in and never resurface. They are cruel and vicious and I know that They will not stop at anything to catch me.
“Geez, Lu get a grip on yourself!” I glanced up to see my partner Brianna glaring at me, obviously unhappy to be paired with someone as unpopular as me. “Yeah Mr. Roberts said to study the frog but you are allowed to blink!” It amazed me how she could go an entire sentence without losing the I’m-better-than-you-which-means-you-should-do-everything-I-say tone.
I gritted my teeth trying to focus on the brat before me, but even with my eyes wide open the world shimmered, and for a moment a transparent scene appeared before me, fizzling like a T.V with bad reception. The most beautiful landscape you could ever imagine and even then thousands of times more lovely. It flickered softly and pulled me, closer, closer, brought me to that place that painfully wonderful place. It began to solidify, slowly covering Brianna blocking out her annoyed face and glaring eyes. And an eerie singing filled my ears and my heart flooding out Brianna superior tone, her criticizing comments, and pulled me deeper into that world of cleverly disguised nightmares.
- by Sila Calien |
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- | Submitted on 07/15/2009 |
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- Title: Call of The Fey
- Artist: Sila Calien
- Description: well i wrote this for a contest on gaia ^^ im only going to put the first part of my story but if i get enough comments and good ratings ill start putting the other parts up... oh and one more thing: dont even THINK of stealing meh writing or else i will hunt you down and kill you and this is my own work im sorry if you saw a similar story but if its the exact same check the date ^^ bet ya they posted it after me! well enjoy!!!
- Date: 07/15/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- The Wrath Of Sorrow - 11/13/2009
- i think its really good writing material and i can see a good story out of this
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- There Will Be Bears - 07/15/2009
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im just saying this because she is mah friend so yay fer alex!!! x(
its very well written with only a few minor errors mrgreen
5/5 (gotta give her support right???) - Report As Spam
- Saibl - 07/15/2009
- Wow Alex this is great! You have to post more or I will hunt you down and kill you. (emphasis on the "I" wink Anyways don't put too much time into this - we're waiting for your book. *^-^*
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