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I still couldn't understand why all the men on board were yelling and pointing in a certen direction. I ran into the croud until I found my first man to ask him what was happening.
"It's a god, Captin. A real god." he said pointing with the rest of the men. As he said that I started to look in that direction and saw it --her.
On top of a rock, not far from our ship there was a woman, well not like anyone I had ever seen. Her skin was beautifully pale and her long blond her did look like something from heaven. She had nothing on, the only thing stopping her breasts from showing was her strait, long hair. What really surpized me and everyone else on ship was the fact that where her legs were supposed to start, blue and grey scales formed a type of tail.
This creature, after capturing everyone's attention started to sing. Her voice was as beautiful as her apearence. After, what seemed a long time, I fond myself unable to look away from her. All I wanted was to be with her, and I knew every man on board felt the same thing. Some were jumping into the ice cold water to try and swim to her, but were carried away by the waves or eaten by the animals that lived there. All I did was watch them, not finding the will to try and stop tham, even though I knew they were going to die.
The few men left on board already knew what was going on and were trying to break that daemon's curse. All we could do was watch her, and every second, fall more in love, agenst our own will.
I feltl the ship shaking when we hit something and started to sink. I could see a smile on her face when the water started to rise to our knees and we slowly sank with the ship, unable to do anything, unable to break the curse.
- by The Berry Lipstick |
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- | Submitted on 07/28/2009 |
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- Title: Trapped
- Artist: The Berry Lipstick
- Description: Just another random writing. It's not so good since it's late here and I'm tiered. Please Coment.
- Date: 07/28/2009
- Tags: trapped mermaid ship curse
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ElectraShocked - 08/03/2009
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Maybe if you described the mermaid's (as I'm asuming she is) captivating beauty and why they can't look away from her, and what her voice sounds like. I'm not going to rate this yet because you could fix it a bit.
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- paramoreluvr96 - 07/30/2009
- whoa. that's really good! love it! please continue writing these!
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