- There was really nothing exciting about Michelle's life until the "thing" happened. It changed her whole life.Let me start from the beginning,it was a cool day.The air was crisp,the wind was warm it was all perfect then came a cloud than another, and another.More and more clouds came followed by rain.Michelle was stuck outside for she was wandering. She took shelter in an abandoned shed. Yes it is always like that, one of the characters go to an abandoned house or shed, but there was something that lured her over there. It seemed to sing to her,pulling her in,telling her to come. In a trance she went inside. It was damp and scary but yet Michelle felt like she belonged there. While wandering around she heard singing. "A la roo roo Bebe ven con migo Bebe" sang a beautiful female voice. "A la roo roo Bebe ya voy con tigo mama" Michelle found herself singing. The singing did not surprise her what did was that she said 'mama'. She followed the voice and found an empty room. Or it appeared to be empty. The beautiful voice started again except this time it was faster and surprised. "Who are you?" asked Michelle. The voice stopped. Slowly white mist pulled around Michelle. It spun slow at first than faster,and faster,and faster until Michelle was left gasping for air crawling on the ground. Abruptly the mist stopped and Michelle was left alone until she saw a shadow in the corner of the room. Michelle staggered slowly still out of breath towards the corner of the room.The shadow became clearer and clearer until she could see a full figure. Michelle had a sudden temptation to call her "mama". The figure reached out and touched her heart millions of pictures and voices came to her. Horrible memories, loving memories, and confusing memories. Suddenly she woke up in a field of flowers, resting on something furry. Scared to even want to find out what it was she quickly ran away. She quickly realized that this was not where she lived. I mean it was pretty clear. The trees where not blooming acorns but instead strange looking flowers with pointy mini diamonds, the grass was not spiky and filled with red ants but instead soft and red ant free, the Daisy's were gone and instead red, pink, and white roses replaced their place. Michelle liked it. She sat down on a smooth tree bump. At home they would usually hurt and be covered with ants but where she was (wherever that is) they where nice and clean of ants. Michelle sat there for a while thinking "Where am I?". "In Uvillasia" replied a boy. "Wha?" "Oh crap!" she screamed and fell back. The boy caught her. She thanked him and stood up. He wasn't that tall but not short, his hair was blond and had small freckles on his cheeks making a bridge of them on his nose to the other cheek, he had beautiful aqua blue eyes that shone in the dawn sun. "How could you hear me, I was talking in my head?" "Uh not really you where actually talking pretty loud." he replied. "Oh" said Michelle she twisted her lips while feeling a bit embarrassed. "My names Altun, and your's?" "Oh I'm Michelle nice to meet you." The boys face turned white, he quickly grabbed her hand and pulled her yelling at her something about who he has to return her to the palace or the queen would be angered. She pulled a foot back and dug it in the ground. The boy fell back and toppled, back first, on her. He quickly lifted her up and said "Please forgive me your majesty i i didn't mean to!" he bowed and then pulled her again, this time his grip was a bit tighter so she didnt resist. A few 30 or so minutes after that they arrived at a beautiful town. The sun shone brighter so she could see the Altun better. His Light tan skin was a little red at the cheeks from some kind of embarrassment or could it have been the running. People outside where stopping, gasping and bowing. They where all looking at Michelle. Altun stopped and he stopped so suddenly that Michelle practicly went flying. They were in front of a gaint mansion. It was white with a tint of pink, the two white doors where covered in gems and the roof above it was supported with two colunms that where wrapped in soft grassy vines with more unusual flowers that where red, brown, and had a little bit of shining silvery dew that wouldnt come off. It looked very elegant and extravagant. Altun knocked with a gold hook in the shape of a weird animal. The door opened and showed a strong but elegant looking man. He looked at Altun and then at Michelle. He opened it wider and bowed and motioned for her to come in. Exactly as she stepped in many servants lifted her up onto a soft wide cushuion. They carried her to a room where she saw a young woman in the corner crying. she had the same figure as the person in the shed. She turned around quickly at the sound of footsteps. Michelle saw her face and remembered the memories and the rush that she had given her in the shed.
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- | Submitted on 08/04/2009 |
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- Date: 08/04/2009
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