Black Dawn - Ending

• Artist: iTzReWiiND
• Description: This is a part of a book me and my friend Mykah are writing.
  Im writing about a certain squad of soldiers he's writing about another squad.
  This may become a real book.
  This is World War III.
  The year is 2117.
  This part that you have or are about to read is the last part of the book.
  Tell me what you think and im open to ideas.
  The last part of this right here is a cliff hangar.
  Who said that?
  Well you might find out in the sequel.
  Rising Sun.
• Date: 11/04/2009
• Tags: black dawn ending

Allen ran through the empty, broken streets of Tokyo, gun raised expecting Germans to pop out and blast him back to the stone age. But everything was quiet, except his radio.
"It looks like German troops are falling back to there damned country! Victory is ours! The Black Dawn is over." Commander Drandi spoke through the radio.
Allen felt pride surge through him, as he watched Black Hawks fly overhead.
"I hope there coming to pick me and the other soldiers up..." Allen whispered.
A sudden thunder-like sound interuppted him, and German fighters roared above him firing at the Black Hawks.
One of the fighters launched a missile at the helicopters but it hit the skyscraper next to Allen.
He looked up and the building toppled over destroying half the city.
"Crime never pays."

Comments

[tygercat222]

i think it's good.But it all depends on the persons preffrence. so expect to get a variety of answers