- I've just finished university,me and my friends have worked so hard for this day.To be free is just a relief,i can finally open my eyes and breath for once.Walking home chatting to friends about what they're going to do for a job they had no clue.Chris comes up to me and asks if i could walk him home,i agreed that i would only walk him half way.We carried on and left everyone else,down the path me and chris just made conversation.Finally we get half way when he asks me to join him in a party a couple of miles away in the woods,i couldn't let a friend down and seeing as it's the end of university i though i could need a treat,so i told him for sure that i would come.I got home when my parents gave me a unfamilar welcoming,dad came up to me a told me how proud he was for me to be his son,and mum baked me some fresh cookies.They sat me down and said seeing as i finished university that i could take a break from home so they wanted me to go to auntie jills for a couple of months, i told them that i couldn't and that i wanted to stay and find a job,i didn't want them to find out about the party.Dad started to get angry he shouted saying that auntie Jill is more than welcome to let me stay at her house and that i should go and not argue with him,i got furious i slammed the door and took a break,breathing in the cold air from outside.
- by Jiro Uzimaki |
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- | Submitted on 11/16/2009 |
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- Title: I Will Die With My Brothers P1
- Artist: Jiro Uzimaki
- Description: This is part one of my first stories "I Will Die With My Brothers" I will not tell you anything about the story yet because i want to leave my parts at a cliffhanger.I will create new parts every week,This part is the start and is very depressing but the action will build up.
- Date: 11/16/2009
- Tags: university friends brother brothers action
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- xx- Cookie Lova -xx - 11/27/2009
- This is good. I don't think it needs ANY improving.
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- Jiro Uzimaki - 11/16/2009
- Please point out any mistakes and how i could improve it.
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