- She lightly touched her lips against mine, we were snuggling on the couch. she moved her hands to my waist she grinned and we kisssed slightly, and looked at each other. we leaned in but then the phone rang, i picked it up and the voice from the other line told me that my brother had been driving drunk with my mother and they both crashed, only my brother survived. i dropped it and fell to my knees. she held me while we cried and the sun came up. we watched it and cried and we never kissed. after that day she wouldn't talk to me, she just sadly and cutely gased at me with her crush look. we were in love but it ruined everything, and then one day we met up and finally kissed again. but we hesitated............
- by goodcharlotte007 |
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- | Submitted on 11/18/2009 |
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- Title: The summer of us
- Artist: goodcharlotte007
- Description: well just alitttle taste of a story i'm writing....hope ya'll like it.
- Date: 11/18/2009
- Tags: summer
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Comments (4 Comments)
- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 02/09/2010
- I like it.
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- Wuppa Wuppa - 11/21/2009
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very good work.....but i'm too astonished to even say anymore just know........i'll never leave your side even if it may seem so
5/5 great job - Report As Spam
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 11/20/2009
- aaaaaaw smile I do like it indeed smile write away biggrin
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