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note: i changed some stuff mostly grammar and punctuation but w/e! lol XD
The Vampire’s Ruler
The dark cold night blows calmly around me. Not far from where you were standing, watching me stop and sniff the air every once in a while, your wondering “what are you looking for?” As I walk around I notice the scent of blood. The scent sticks to the air like condensation on a window, during a cold night. I continue to smell the enticing scent, following it, I found you. I see you and you see me. To you I’m just a normal looking person, but to me you’re like fine wine. My mind is exposed to the red ooze that coursing through your veins. It makes me crave you more and more.
Unable to bare it any longer, my fangs come rushing out as I slowly walk over while staring at your neck. My long and sharp fangs are now in the open. EXPOSED. You’re afraid yet you chose to stand still while staring at my pearl white fangs. I’m coming into close contact with your neck. You take a deep breathe, I chuckle at you, slowly reaching for you; I grab you. Pulling you closer and closer and closer, I start to hold you close with your neck being pulled close to my mouth, I smell it some more. I gasp as I notice your blood is AB positive; how rare. I lick your neck and sniffing it once more, then my fangs slowly sink into your neck you feel a sharp pain, then you are left numb; while the blood from your neck slowly gushes out and I start to drink the ooze that is pouring out. I feel the adrenaline rushing through your veins; I feel the warm yet sweet ooze running down my throat. Your mind goes blank. Nothing there but the flashes of short memories, my mind is growing wild by the minute.
The blood is making me crave you more and more. It’s making me feel like there’s ecstasy in me, but it’s in comforting ozone of pleasure. The rush is almost unbearable. The blood coming out of you is making you feel pleasure, not pain. It feels amazing beyond words, you’re panting for more, and you pull me even closer, so close that our bodies are practically rubbing against each other; I slowly pull my fangs out. I lick your neck once more finishing off my meal. You’re still numb yet a warm tingling sensation is left on your neck. Your heart is thumping so fast it’s out of control and I can hear the loud thumping. We suddenly start to stare into each others eyes, you notice my eyes are not a normal color; it’s a dark blood red.
You kiss me despite the fact that you know I’m not even human, and that my heart is not even thumping. You can’t even hear it. As you notice the blood on my lips are dripping down my mouth, you hug me close and tight, I grew tired of this game, I wanted to leave you for dead, but for some reason you and I both know your slowly closing your eyes. You still hold me knowing your soul is slowly escaping. I can’t even push you away and leave you behind. I wanted to walk away as I listen for your heartbeat to fade, but were still close to each other. The elders will get very inpatient with me. But were still close enough to feel each others warm breathe, you smell the scent of blood coming from my mouth, but for some reason you ask me "Did you enjoy it?" with a smiling face you lift up your head and kiss me. I close my eyes, thinking what should I do? What makes him so different from any other human in the world? But for some reason I seemed to have stayed longer with this meal than any other meal. “Love” as what the elders would say, but its forbidden, taboo! I sigh, and don’t say anything, but I kiss you back. I changed my mind. I want him to live! I feel as though he may serve a purpose, perhaps it’s that… He may live longer as one of my kind. The elders can yell at me for this! I slowly lift up my wrist, scratching it hard enough to break through the skin, to let the blood flow out. At first you refused. I urged you to drink if he wanted to live again. Letting him imagine how long we could be together. As he stared he said, “When you were drinking my blood, if felt ecstatic. I had somehow fallen in love.” Then seconds go by. He parts his lips and drinks. Small pants are released into the air, as he drank more and more. I push him to a stop, gasping, I said, “You’ll feel the pain later, but you’ll know that it was worth it.” Then he passed out, unable to bare the rush.
I’m not human; I admit it to confirm the confusion. So I go out to find a meal, but first the elders.
Thumping noises coming from below my feet, I look around. It’s bright, how annoying. The receptionist smiles at me “The elder may see you now”. I smirk I bet he’s furious. I enter the room, I hear disapproving whispers.
“I see you now know my dear elders.”
“Yes, we know of your misdeeds, we will over look this, but…” he looks around the room. “You must kill the boy, he will destroy our kind!”
“I think not, I wish for a request to test the boy.”
“Request denied.”
“Surely you have not been thinking about…” I look around and whisper “The prophecy?”
“Silence, such outrages keep it to your self! A girl like you has no say in this”.
“Don’t you wish to meet him too?”
“I said silence! Just because you’re the very eldest only daughter, does not mean you have power!”
“Well not until the brittle old man is dead” I giggle “If it is him, the prophecy will rule over the human’s” I giggle once more “The vampire world will rule”
He clears his throat “Yes, that is what the prophecy says, we are not even sure if it’s true”.
“Yes, it also says it will have rare blood and has no fear of vampires; also the blood that is consumed will drive that vampire to do some bidding. So if I test him we will then know”.
More sighs, and a few more grumbles “Request re-approved”.
I smile “Like you said I am the only daughter of the eldest” I leave while hearing more grumbles.
I see the receptionist again “Hey you! Go get me some blood, fresh, I want it from the source”.
“Of course, right away”. She gets up, I smell her, and I smirk. A human that’s peculiar. I walk towards her with a bottle in my hand. I hit her head; she falls to the floor. “The prophecy’s meal has been made” I smirk once more.
Hours go by and he wakes up to an irresistible scent. Looking around he sees a woman tied up and knocked out cold. Curious; he gets up to untie her. She’s breathing. He sees her neck. Hearing the pulse from her neck, it hits him hard. His stomach is growling, as if it was saying “Feed me!!” He bends down and bites her neck. HARD; Him not knowing I was watching the entire time, I smirk are you really the prophecy? You drank her without a second thought. The first meal is always the newest experience.
TO BE CONTINUED…
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- | Submitted on 12/19/2009 |
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- Title: vampire ruler
- Artist: pretty_little_indie
- Description: um vampires? no i dont like twilight
- Date: 12/19/2009
- Tags: vampire love blood
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- Kosmic Koala - 01/12/2010
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Incredible.
It has thoughts and describes what the experience is!
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