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Windy and dark, the night crept though the windows of my cold room.
Slowly the shadows overtook my thoughts.
My mind flooded with the darkness, leaving no room for light.
I stand in the nakedness of my vivid hollowness, waiting for the emptiness to fade into the void.
All in my vision is black, all that I hear is whispers, whimpers, echoes of consciousness drifting though the void.
I am lost, unable to see the true path before me.
Unable to hear loving word to guide me.
Lost in the endless nothingness, stuck in the darkness of my inner self.
Unable to set me free, unable to forgive.
- by Dark_Gale017 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/15/2010 |
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- Title: Vivid Void
- Artist: Dark_Gale017
- Description: Please let me know what you think.
- Date: 01/15/2010
- Tags: vivid void
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- Kimiko Owl-Rider - 01/07/2011
- Wow, that is really good but somewhat depressing. It really moved and inspired me. You definitely deserve a 5/5. Never stop writing!
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