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Chapter 2
The Void was confused. It felt like it's head was spinning. It looked around and all it could see was a blur of colors and it felt something watery on it's cheeks. It raised a hand to it's cheeks and felt the watery substance. It's tears....Annelise informed it. The Void was now even more confused. Why was I crying? A Void doesn't cry. It said as it went through her memories of what had happened. Apparently after the boy named Riley left because of what the Void had said,Annelise had been crying even harder then usual. The Void had then accidentally left it's guard down and Annelise broke through and,for the first time in months,had taken over her own body. She had went straight downstairs to her parents liquor cabinet and had started drinking everything in sight. It had made her very drunk,but it had made the Void incabable of taking over Annelise's body again till she was sober. Everything in Annelise's memory was a blur of sound and color after that. Parents screaming after they found her unconscious body on the floor,sirens from the ambulance,a bright white light with someone asking for her name. She had slurred out her name so slowly that they thought she had brain damage. Then it had turned all dark. The Void had been the one to wake up,not Annelise. Annelise was now back in her own little version of Hell where the Void seriously thought she belonged. The Void shook it's head at all Annelise had done while the Void had been gone. She had made such a mess and now the Void had to fix it. You are never taking control again. It said coldly as Annelise cried more and more. The memories of when Emma died and when Riley visited playing in her little version of Hell over and over.
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- | Submitted on 01/29/2010 |
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- Title: The Void Chapter 2
- Artist: breathing_is_not_allowed
- Description: More of Annelise and the Void.The next chapter will have Riley and her parents in it. Hope you like it. Leave a comment telling me if you like it and rate! Thanks.
- Date: 01/29/2010
- Tags: void chapter annelise hospital
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Comments (3 Comments)
- breathing_is_not_allowed - 01/30/2010
- http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101969957#title Next Chapter!
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- breathing_is_not_allowed - 01/30/2010
- That's what I was planning to do in the next chapter. smile Thanks!
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- xXAlice RockzXx - 01/30/2010
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aww!!! itz so sad!! :'( btu id really like it if ud slow down a bit, and explain things a bit more, like annelise's old personality--other characters' as well--wut happened in the past (like how her sister died)
but this is really good. keep writing!! - Report As Spam