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reiko is literally running down the halls,she is saying "oh no,if i'm late for class,i am sooooo fired!" she runs then slips but gets up then runs and finds the room and says "i'm sorry i'm late class, i may look young because i am but i'm your new teacher,you can call me miss reiko" ok class why don't we introduce ourselves,then reiko notices rayla and remembers her and says "the girl with the glasses please stand up & introduce yourself." then ralya stands up and introduces herself "hello,my name is Rayla akisame, i hail from osaka,japan,i'm 14 years old i went here because i was asked to go to school here" then every one of them introduce themselves then the school bell rang then miss reiko said "class dismiss.but for miss akisame and miss moryou(miss moryou is reiri by the way) please stay after class" and so they did then rayla asked "uhhmmm....miss reiko why did i have to stay, and will this go on my permanent record???" then reiri asked "well i know that you know that i know that you know i didn't do anything so why keep me here?" then reiko laughs at both of them and says "oh no , none of those things will happen rayla,and reirii know that, i was just wondering since we look alike would you like to have a slumber party,i mean just to know each other" then the two girls nodded and said "yes" then that night they went to reiko's new home (well she had to live close to her job) so reiko prepared the most mouth-watering desserts then she said "well, whattaya waitin' for?,dig in!" then rayla got a cup full of a sundae,after tasting it she said to reiko "wow..are you a chef?!" reiko replied "no,but i'm glad to know you like it" then she turns to reiri and asks "how about you reiri whattaya think?" rala and reiko see reiri just gobbling up cup after cup of desserts and says "woah! i guess you like it sweatdrop " then suddenly they heard something, reiri said "i'll check it out ,coz i'm gonna get another cup of sundae anyway" then she went into the kitchen suddenly reiri screamed, rayla and reiko rushed to find out that giant reptillian creatures had come into the kitchen,then the reptillian turned around to attack reiri but reiko grabbed a mop saying to rayla and reiri "RUN!" then the two fled while reiko was holding back the two reptillian creatures, the other reptillian grabbed a sword and cut the mop in half then the other threw reiko against the wall barely missing the window, reiko looks up and sees that she is about to die closed her eyes (this by the way is an act of dignity) suddenly rayla and reiri came bursting through the window,making the reptillians back off reiri turns to reiko and says "are you ok?" then reiko stands up, dusts herself off, and replies "yes i'm fine,now, let's go kick some lizard butt!" then all say "yeah" so then the clash between our heroes and the assasins started, reiri gave a mighty kick and the first reptillian hit the ground accidentally throwing a bowl of onions into the which reiri accidentally slices suddenly reiri starts to cry then rayla asks why she was crying reiri replies "it's the onions, can't help but cry" then rayla says "me too!" then reiko (teary-eyed) says "don't worry i can handle this quickly gives the two giant lizards the beating, then they suddenly vanished, reiko though is still crying due to the onions, meanwhile in the palace of urado,there the two assasins were teleportedone was brought to the castle nurses while the other one was being asked by urado....
to be continued.....
- Title: THREE QUEENS.PART 3
- Artist: danni507
- Description: this is part three!
- Date: 05/23/2010
- Tags: three queens part
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- danni507 - 05/29/2010
- thanks!
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- Sovereign Winter - 05/28/2010
- You're off to a good start. You have a cute, interesting concept going; all you have to do is work on your actual writing, and I don't see why you can't try publishing your work? Just keep working at it. You'll get better as time progresses. Also, you should continue the story.
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