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“stop please stop!” Amber cried. So the evil goo stopped it and the spikes went back up. “so are you going to write in your book for me or do I have to kill your mom.” asked the evil goo, “I’ll write just don’t kill my mom.” Amber said. So the evil goo handed the book to Amber and a pencil and waited for her to write. “Don’t do it Amber.” Isabella said, “quiet you.” said the evil goo. So Amber wrote one word and she went into a trance and started to write and write. So She wrote for hours with out breaks as the evil goo watched her, but then Amber stopped, “What happened why aren’t you writing in your book?” Asked the evil goo. “I don’t have anything else to write.” said Amber, “no, no you can be done, you have to write more!” evil goo said ,“But I can’t I’m out of ideas and the trance comes every once in a while.” said Amber, but the evil goo didn’t care he only wanted her to write in it so he can take over the world. “I have an idea.” said the evil goo. Then he left the room and Amber and Isabella were all alone, “quick Amber get me out of here.” Isabella said. So Amber tried, but she couldn’t get her mom out of the cage. So Amber looked around the room and she saw that the evil goo left the remote that control the cage in the room. So Amber grabbed it, “witch one do I press.” Amber asked. “it doesn’t matter just press a button.” Isabella said. So Amber pressed a button and the spikes started to come down and Isabella screamed. So Amber pressed it again and it stopped, “okay I’m not going to do that one again.” Amber said. So she tried another one at first it didn’t do nothing, but then the cage started to shock Isabella and she screamed in pain. So amber stopped it and hit another one and the cage opened. “Okay lets get out of here.” said Isabella, “no we can’t.” Amber said, “why?” asked Isabella, “Because we have to burn the book so the evil goo will go away.” Amber told her mom. “But how are we going to do that?’ Asked Isabella, but Amber wasn’t sure. Then they heard the evil goo coming back so they hid and when the evil goo came back in and he look around and saw that they weren’t there. “Where did they go?” Asked the evil goo, but he couldn’t find them. So he went out of the room to look for them and when he did Isabella and Amber came out of there hiding spots. “that was close.” Amber said, “Come on let get out of here and burn the book.” Isabella told Amber.
So they went and walked around looking for fire, but they couldn’t find any, “where is a fire when we need it?” Amber asked, but instead of finding fire they saw the front door opened, “Come on, now is are chance to escape.” Isabella said. So they headed towards the door and went outside and they were free, “So where are we going to go now?” asked Amber, “I don’t know.” Isabella said. So they just started to walk around hoping the evil goo doesn’t find them and when they were walking a car started to follow them, “Hey mom do u see that car following us?” Ask Amber, “Yeah.” said Isabella, but they didn’t do anything and kept on walking and walking, but the car kept following. So they walked a little bit faster, but the car still followed and every time they do that the car will still follow unit they started to run then the car will stop.
After a few minutes of trying to get away from the car, the car went away and they started to walk slowly again, “That was weird.” Isabella said, “I know that car was following us like it wanted something from us.” said Amber, “I wonder what it wanted?” asked Isabella, but they didn’t know and kept walking. All of a sudden the car came out of nowhere again at full speed towards Isabella and Amber and ran them over and then left the spot. When it did people stood around and took pictures and called 911.
Couple of days later Amber woke up in a hospital bed and she looked around and saw balloons and cards from people. Then she looked over and she saw her mom and she was awake, “What happened?’ Amber asked, “I don’t know.” Isabella answered. Then a nurse came in, “Nurse can you tell us what happened and how we got here?” Isabella asked. So the nurse did and when she told them they couldn’t believe it. So the nurse left and Isabella and Amber were talking, “I think it was the evil goo that did it.” Amber said, “I think so too.” said Isabella. “We should go tell one of the doctor that we know who ran us over.” said Amber, but when they were going to the evil goo appeared out of nowhere, “hello.” said the evil goo, “get away from us.” Said Amber, “What you don’t like me?” Asked the evil goo, “you’re the one that tried to run us over.” Isabella said, “very good.” said the evil goo, “Why?” Amber asked. Then he looked at Amber and said, “cause you left the house and you weren’t going to write in the book and you thought if you didn’t write in the book that everything will just go away, well I have news for you, it won’t. I’m just like a nightmare.” Then he did his evil laugh and Amber got up and tried to leave the room, but the evil goo shocked her and she fell to the ground in pain and he laughed some more. “If Amber writes in the book will you leave us alone?” Asked Isabella, “only if she finished the whole entire book.” the evil goo said, “Okay she’ll do it.” said Isabella. Then Amber got up and said, “no I won’t.” Then the evil goo looked at Amber, “you should listen to your mother.” said the evil goo, “No I’m not going to write in that book so you could have what you want.” Amber said, “Please Amber just write in the book and then everything will be over with.” said Isabella, but Amber still wouldn’t do it. Then a doctor came in and the evil goo disappeared and they got to go home.
So when they were home they were talking about the evil goo and how he disappeared, “That was weird?’ said Amber, “I know he some how disappeared without a trace.” Isabella said. So they went into the kitchen and still talking they heard someone come in through the front door, but nobody was home except for them, “hello? Is someone there?” ask Isabella, but no one answered. So Isabella slowly went into the front room and looked around, but no one was there, “who was it?” Amber asked, “I don’t know.” Isabella said. Then they hear foot steps coming from Amber’s room, “what was that?” Amber asked, but Isabella didn’t know and they slowly walked to Amber’s room and Amber peeked in and she saw the evil goo. “what is the evil goo doing here and how did he find us?” asked Amber, but Isabella didn’t know and when they were watching the evil goo, the evil goo saw them and zapped them and they were knocked out again and he dragged them to two chairs and tied them up and waited for them to wake up.
So when they woke up they saw that they were tied and they saw the evil goo, “what are you doing here?” Asked Amber, “Do I really need to tell you why I’m here?” the evil goo asked, “let us go.” said Isabella, “I will only if Amber finishes the book.” the evil goo said looking at Amber, “no I won’t do it, you can’t make me.” said Amber, “or maybe I can.” he said. Then he came closer to Amber and pulled out a shot and grabbed the book and Amber asked, “what are you going to do to me?”, But the evil goo didn’t say anything and gave her the shot and Amber face went blank and the evil goo gave Amber the book and untied her and gave her a pencil and she started to write and write, “what did you do to my daughter?” Ask Isabella, “don’t worry, I just gave her something to make her write for me.” he said, “snap her out of it.” Isabella demanded, but the evil goo won’t listen to her and he left the room. when he left Isabella try to snap Amber out it, but she won’t and Amber kept on writing and writing. So Isabella tried to get out, but instead she tipped the chair back and fell to the ground. Then Isabella said, “this will never work.” Then the evil goo came in and saw Isabella on the floor still tied up and laughed at her, “here this will make sure you won’t get way.” he said as he put a collar on her, “What do I look like to you a dog?” she asked, “it’s not just a collar it’s a shock collar.” said the evil goo. Then he put one on Amber and left the room again, “well this sucks.” Isabella said. So she wait for Amber to snap out of her trance.
A couple hours later Amber snapped out of the trance and she looked around and she saw that she had written in the book, “darn it! I wrote in the book again.” Amber said, “it’s not your fault.” said Isabella, “but the evil goo got what he wanted and now another chapter is going to happed and we need to stop it.” Amber said, “well we can’t do that.” said Isabella, “why not?” Amber asked, “we got shock collars on.” said Isabella, but before Amber could talk the evil goo came back in, “well I see that the shot wore off.” he said, “you won’t get way with this.” Amber said. Then the evil goo laughed at her, “I always ready have.” said the evil goo and then laughed at her again and when he was laughing Isabella got untied and attacked the evil goo, but when she did the collar shocked her and she fell to the floor in pain,” I told you, you have a shock collar on, every time you try to escape it will go off.” said the evil goo, but Isabella didn’t do anything and lied there in pain as the shock collar still shocked her, “stop it.. Stop it now, stop hurting my mom.” Amber said, but the evil goo didn’t listen to her and she got out and the shock collar shocked her and she fell down to the floor in pain. “you foolish girl you should of know that if got out the shock collar will shock u.” said evil goo. “Get it off of me now!” Amber screamed, but the evil didn’t do what she said, but instead evil goo tied Isabella back up and grabbed Amber and they went to a different room..
When they were in a different room the evil goo threw Amber on the floor and left the room. So Amber tried to get out, but she couldn’t. “Let me out of here!” Amber yelled, but no one came. So she sat in the corner and waited, but the evil goo came back in and he had a knife, spoon, and lighter. “I’m going to give you one last chance to write more of your story for me.” said the evil goo, but Amber didn’t speak and spate in his face. So he got the lighter and the spoon and heated the spoon up until it was burning red hot. Then he came towards Amber. “What are you going to do with that spoon.” Amber asked, but the evil goo didn’t say anything and came towards her. Then he grabbed her wrist and held her arm out and put the burning hot spoon on her arm and she screamed as the evil goo watched her skin get slowly burned off. Then he took the spoon off of her skin. “will you write for me again?” the evil goo asked. “No!.” yelled Amber so the evil goo put down spoon and grabbed the knife and held out Amber wrist, “no please no.. no more.” Cried Amber, but the evil goo slit her arm and she bled out slowly. “Write for me or else.” the evil goo said. “Or else what?” ask Amber. “I will kill your mother.” said the evil goo, but Amber didn’t say anything and the evil goo got impatient and smacked her across the face and left the room. As Amber sat there on the floor watching the blood drip down to the floor she got up and tried to open the door this time and it was unlocked. So she left the room and went to the room where her mom was.
So when she saw her mom she was tied up and Amber went into the room and went to her mom. “mom your okay.” said Amber. Then Isabella looked at Amber arm and saw the cut. “what happened to your arm?” asked Isabella. “oh its nothing.” Amber said as she put her arm behind her slowly. “the evil goo hurt you didn’t he?” asked Isabella, but before Amber could say anything the evil goo came into the room and saw that Amber was in the room. “How did you get out?” asked the evil goo. “The door was unlocked.” Amber said. “well I guess we will have to change that.” said the evil goo. Then he shocked Amber and she was knocked out and he tied her up and grabbed a spoon again and a lighter. Then he went up to Amber, “What are you going to do to her.” asked Isabella. “shut up or I’ll make you shut up.” he said as he heated up the spoon with the lighter and opened Amber’s eye. “get away from her now! Or else I swear I will hurt you so badly you won’t even think its funny.” Isabella yelled. Then evil goo looked at her and went up to her, “what did I tell you about talking again.” he said. Then he slapped her across the face and she screamed. Then he went back to Amber, but when he did he saw that Amber was wake. “hello Amber.” he said. “let me go now!” demanded Amber. Then the evil goo thought about it for a moment, “hum NO! not unless you are willing to write for me.” asked the evil goo. “no I will never write for you.” Amber said. “then you leave me no choice, but to do this.” said the evil goo. Then he reheated the spoon and force Amber to opened her eye and he slowly put the burning hot spoon on Amber’s eye as she screamed and struggled to get out. “stop it! Stop hurting my daughter!” screamed Isabella. Then the evil goo got mad at Isabella and went towards her again and slapped her across the face one more time. “the next time you speak I will cut you.” threaten the evil goo. So Isabella stayed quite and he went back to Amber. Then he put the burning hot spoon on Amber’s eye as Amber screamed in pain. “please stop hurting me please!” cried Amber. “then do what I want and I will stop hurting you.” the evil goo said, but Amber wouldn’t do it. So the evil goo reheated the spoon again and burned Amber’s eye again and again as Amber cried in pain. Then he stopped and went into a back room and got pliers and went to Amber. “what are you going to do to me?” asked Amber, but the evil goo didn’t say anything and lifted up Amber’s right hand and put the pliers on her nail. Then he looked at her and ripped off her nails as she screamed in pain. “write for me now!” he yelled, but Amber didn’t. so he ripped off the other nail, but she still wouldn’t do it. Then he ripped out all her nails on her right and left hand. As they were bleeding out the evil goo left and Isabella got out of the cage and went over to Amber and untied her.
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- | Submitted on 06/28/2010 |
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- Title: evil3
- Artist: billybobbojangle
- Description: its a on going story of evil 1 and evil 2.. sorry if there's miss spelled words i havent read oit over yet.. i was to lazy to.. XD
- Date: 06/28/2010
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